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Yours is done, m'lord!

*Stalks*

Yay! I get to post in your WRFF thread.

Azila fa gizzla! Would you do me the honour of reviewing this for me?

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It's the next part of Stop and Stare, as you may have guessed. There's a million and one typos in it due to lack of spell checker, so I hope you don't mind... x3

Please and thank you!

I just wrote this today....so its obviously a rough draft....I was wonder if you could critique it writing style...i know worded sentences awkwardly,find punctuation mistakes, grammar mistakes....what I really need to know is where i should expand...i dont confine with many restrictions but I want this chapter to be 5,000 words and im only on like 3,000 so i want to know where to expand or if i should add on other scenes ( i really dont want to). Even though i dont mention the main idea of the book i want to use this as an introduction. thanks a bunch
P.S. its in word '03

Skins: yours is done, sir!

Cormac: I'm working on it. Should be done tomorrow or the day after. It's finished!

Hey- I was wondering (if you have the time) if you could please look at this. If you don't have the time, I totally understand.

Thanks either way!

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Yours is done, Persephoflanabadabawhateveryournameis. ^.^

*Bumbs*

LIVE, THREAD. LIVE.

Hai. In case you haven't guessed yet, it's Skins here. You may have guessed due to the aggression above, but I thought I'd make sure.

Would you mind reviewing the beginning of mine and Punk's novel? You are a God, therefore, your reviews are also Godworthy. We need you. Neeeeeed yooooou.

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Please and thank you.

'Tis done, sir.

*Bumbs*

Never mind your p's and q's--you, my friend, need to mind your b's and p's!

b's an P's look the same, k?

I swear I'm partially dyslexic...

Anyway, I'm back. Mwhahahahahahahahaha. I love how I stalk your thread. Anyways, I'm a greedy child, so I'd really appreciate it if you could review the next part of Stop and Stare for me.

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As you're aware, I've been having some trouble with it, so don't expect amazingness or anything. If you expect that, you'll be disappointed and cry.

Please and thank you!

Heyy! I was wondering if you could review the prologue of my General Fiction story?

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Skins: yours is done!

stelagineva: I'm sorry, but that's a bit too graphic for me. In general I don't want to review things rated 18+. Sorry to disappoint! I sent you a PM about it, so please feel free to PM me back if you want to discuss the matter. ^_^

Hi Azila I was referred to you by a friend of mine on YWS, borntobeawriter?
She's been following a novel of mine since the beginning and she said I need another pair of eyes to catch things.
You come highly recommended as being "brilliant", so I'd love if you could take a look at it!
I read on your first page that you don't do novels but I hope for me you may make an exception?
My chapter's aren't that long and there are only nine of them.

If you do decide to check them out, below are the links to the first two chapters. It's under Historical Fiction and it's a story based around the Holocaust. No one seems to have shown any interest in it and it's slightly frustrating because it has taken up a good year of my life!

Thank you and if you choose not to do it then thanks for reading this
~day

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First chapter is done, day! I shall get to the second (and the rest) as soon as I can.

Hey Azila! I've finally gotten the first chapter (or at least, the first half of it) of Rebirth up! So I was wondering if you could grace it with one of your epic reviews, and give it a well-needed kick in the butt.

Thanks in advance,

Tiger

Done, Tiger!

By the way, people: I'm fairly busy right now. I don't mind requests, but just know that I may be a few days getting your review to you. I should do it within a week, but please be patient!