If you would be willing, I would really enjoy a review on my newest piece My First and Final Escape. It's a very short story located in the Other Fiction forum so it shouldn't be too out of your element for you.
Thanksies!!
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.
There you go, Lily. That's your critique done. Hope it helped. Sorry it took so long, but I've edited the thread to notify me when someone replies, so I should get around to them a lot faster.
Rather short prologue of a short novella I'm doing.
Anyways, I've always appreciated your reviews so anything you have to say would be big help. Also, if there's anything you would like reviewed, all you have to do is ask.
~lily
Never forget who you are, for surely the world will not. Make it your strength. Then it can never be your weakness. Armor yourself in it, and it will never be used to hurt you.
I hope that was fast enough for you, Lily. xD I am restless today, apparently. I have a craving to review. I never know what to critique unless I'm linked to it, though.
Hi~
Well, i dont write myself, nor have i posted any topics here,
but i was wondering if you would please review my sisters story
"Curumbasa::Island of secrets"
which can be found here:
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