Young Writers Society

Um, yeah, what Melkor said!

Name: The Love Note
Genre: Supernatural
Word Count: 4622
Link: post467874.html#467874

It's really long, so I'll understand if you don't want to review it, but I really could use feedback.

Don't be silly, Jamie, I would never turn down a request.
Anyway, they are all done- any more?

Please review?

topic40098.html
Genre: Fantasy

i know it needs to be edited. I used to think it was okay, but now... *sigh*

Thank you!

All done.
More? *looks hopeful*

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post400537.html#400537

I just edited this, I hope it's better. (:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic40210.html
Thanks! It's only 922 words. I need help on how to extend his background without making it sound cheesy. I edited it once already.

will you review this for me?

topic31457.html-Prolouge

There, all up to date again.
Any more?

YES!

topic40339.html

back again.

this is chapter one: topic32635.html

Well This shouldn't be Chptr 1&2:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37125.html

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic37502.html
The mansion chptr 3 and 4:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic35811.html

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic35930.html

Now, this started off as a story piece for English, but now I have it handed in and graded, I was thinking that I would love to expand on it a bit more. So, I would love a harsh, truthful critique, please, to help me along with this new working progress.
It's in 'Other Fiction' and is a short horror story. Please, take your time on it, here is the link and many, many thanks in advance!!

topic36701.html

--Lucyy xx

If you wouldn't mind...

Tomorrow Does Not Exist

I. topic40092.html
II. topic40155.html
III. post470580.html
IV. topic40731.html

I don't like throwing stories at people, lol, so if there's anything I can do in return, please don't hesitate to ask!

Thanks =]

Sorry guys, I've been camping, I guess I'm behind, huh? Will get on them

Guess what? I'm up to date! So....
Requests anyone? I need more work! ^_^