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Thu Nov 27, 2008 2:20 am
Mars says...



Pretty, pretty please?:smt064
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Thu Nov 27, 2008 3:57 am
pshhxhoney says...



Please and Thanks you> :)

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Thu Nov 27, 2008 5:02 pm
CastlesInTheSky says...



Hey there, Luce.
Could you be an absolute star and review Broken?

I'd like : Chapter Seven: topic37916.html
and chapters nine and ten, if that's not too much of a problem.
They're obviously later chapters in the novella so you may have to read through earlier chapters to decipher what's going on.

Thankyou so much! You rock.

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I would spread the cloths under your feet.
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Wed Dec 10, 2008 8:30 pm
Rascalover says...



thanks for the amazing review
There is nothing to writing; all you do is sit down at a typewriter and open a vein~ Red Smith

Who needs a review? :) http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38078.html





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Thu Dec 11, 2008 4:35 pm
lucyy says...



No problem at all, it was my pleasure (:

Now I have to review everyone elses requests, which they've so patiently waited for =P

--Lucyy xx
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Thu Dec 11, 2008 5:51 pm
lucyy says...



I have now completed all of my requests. So I am now open to more requests, please!! :D

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Sat Dec 13, 2008 5:48 pm
lucyy says...



Come on people, free reviews!! :D
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Tue Dec 16, 2008 7:51 pm
lucyy says...



Come on, everyone!! You gotta love a free review, right?
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Thu Dec 18, 2008 2:07 am
Night Mistress says...



hey Lu.

can you review this for me? I am re-wrting my story.

topic31457.html - this is the prolouge
"I love you," she whispered in his ear, before taking his mouth with her own.

~Elizzabeth Grey of Addicting Posion





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Thu Dec 18, 2008 6:32 pm
Theodorable says...



Here's one of mine.
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Thu Dec 18, 2008 8:49 pm
lucyy says...



I have done yours Night Mistress, and I'm on to yours Teddy right now* :D
--Lucyy xx

*Unfortunately, Teddy, I'm not a poetry person, so it would be a waste really for me to review it. Have you got anything else for me? (:
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Thu Dec 18, 2008 8:56 pm
lucyy says...



Okay, I'm up for two more reviews!! :D
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Thu Dec 18, 2008 11:06 pm
Night Mistress says...



here another.

topic32635.html - chapter 1
"I love you," she whispered in his ear, before taking his mouth with her own.

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Sat Dec 20, 2008 3:55 pm
lucyy says...



Done!
Come on people, two more!!
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Sat Dec 20, 2008 4:38 pm
Night Mistress says...



here another one.

topic32712.html - chapter 2
"I love you," she whispered in his ear, before taking his mouth with her own.

~Elizzabeth Grey of Addicting Posion








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