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All critiques have been done, sorry for the delay! Let me know if you want any more, I'll try to be quicker next time. xD

hii matt,
Don't mean to be a bother but I have edited my previous poem, tje way you told me.
Would you mind having another look at it and leaving comments, wether its better than the previous one or not?
All your help would be really appreciated.
Here's the link:

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Loads of luv,
Fun4eva

Done! Very impressed with your rewrite, fun4eva, well done.

Hiiiii Matt!
I am back....and with a new poem!
I found your last two reviews VERY helpful. So now I know that when I write a poem....this is the place to be!! Here is the link...And thanks in advance for this!!

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Loads of luv,
Fun4eva!

Wow, you're keeping me busy! Done!

I want my blue star, so any requests are greatly appreciated.
*waits for the flood*

Here's one of mine that needs reviews. I´m not sensitive so please be mean.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post421780.html#421780

You've been awesome and critting a few of my poems lately, I'd like to beg another, please.

topic36173.html < it's for a contest.

Thanks.

Le Penguin.

Hey matt!! long time since I asked you for a review right?
Well, heres something to get you typing another review..
If you aren't too busy that is!
Thanks in adance!!

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Hello, Matt I was wondering if you wouldn't mind looking over these two poems and telling me what you think. Thanks so so so so so so much!!!

We're so blind
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Coffee
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Thanks again!!

Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~
Forever Threnody

I'm reopening this thread for requests since I have no uni work etc to do anymore (unless I need to retake any exams...eek!). So request away! Poems only!

Night Walker

*hands over milk and cookies*

Let me know if I can return the favor? Since I've been trying to write poetry lately, I definitely should try critiquing it too. =]

<3

~JFW1415

Hiya!

Mind looking over Death's Sunset for me?

Thanks Matt!

Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries, if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

-ALICE