Help me help you. Request a review! (closed, for now)

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mikepyro
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Thu Oct 27, 2011 4:55 am
mikepyro says... · Thu Oct 27, 2011 4:55 am
yo smilyn, how's it been?
I have a piece that I consider one of my better works that kinda got passed over for reviews when I posted it. Would love your thoughts. Its very dry humored, slow burn, but most really enjoy it.
Here it is:
viewtopic.php?t=83889

If that ain't ur thing ya can always check out me novel Animal. Which be awesome




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SmylinG
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Fri Oct 28, 2011 1:30 am
SmylinG says... · Fri Oct 28, 2011 1:30 am
I'll be getting to all of these recent requests as soon as time opens up. :] Though, I don't think I'll be taking in any new requests at the moment for I'm already so behind. D:
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Jas
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Wed Nov 16, 2011 2:47 am
Jas says... · Wed Nov 16, 2011 2:47 am
It's November 15th. :]]]]]]]]]]

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apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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SmylinG
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Sat Nov 19, 2011 6:32 pm
SmylinG says... · Sat Nov 19, 2011 6:32 pm
*edit*

Request away folks.
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Blues
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Sun Nov 27, 2011 1:43 pm
Blues says... · Sun Nov 27, 2011 1:43 pm
Hai Auntie ^_^ Ducky here!

Could you take a look at this for me? It's a short story that I recently rewrote and I'm quite pleased with so I just wanted to see what improvements I could make.

Thanks a million! I'd be glad to return the favour if you wish :)




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Audy
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Tue Nov 29, 2011 9:54 pm
Audy says... · Tue Nov 29, 2011 9:54 pm
SmylinG,

You would be a big help for this. Let me know if you need anything looked at in turn, I feel like a bother xD




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Niebla
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Sat Dec 03, 2011 9:55 pm
Niebla says... · Sat Dec 03, 2011 9:55 pm
Hey SmylinG,

Could I request a review? http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic91137.html
It would really help if you could give this a quick review. It's kind of long so I feel horrible asking for one - feel free to just ignore it if you don't have the time!

Still, I guess I just want to hear somebody's opinion on it and you seem to give brilliant reviews. :smt001

~MorningMist~




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kasimkaey
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Sat Dec 03, 2011 10:36 pm
kasimkaey says... · Sat Dec 03, 2011 10:36 pm
You're doing reviews for food - AWESOME. Dude, totally check out the novel I'm writing ATM (up to chapter three already WOOP). Sorry I can't link it, the iPod can do many things but that and my laptops far away from me, it's called Revil on my profile - check it out (;

Kasim.




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Xyra
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Mon Dec 12, 2011 3:05 am
Xyra says... · Mon Dec 12, 2011 3:05 am
Would you be amazing and review the two little bits of my novella I have put up? I'm at a bit of a loss as to precisely where I want to go all of a sudden. Post at the bottom of your review(s) if you have something you want me to do! <3 Thanks!
viewtopic.php?t=91373
viewtopic.php?t=91408
More Than Words Can Say
Forever Yours
Xyra Pekkala


PS I will love you forever if you review my story Maia (revised version!)
viewtopic.php?f=2&t=92852
I'll review something of yours in return :P




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Gamergirl
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Wed Dec 14, 2011 12:55 pm
Gamergirl says... · Wed Dec 14, 2011 12:55 pm
Hi. I was wondering if you could review my chapter story Game On if it's not too much trouble. :D
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