Help me help you. Request a review! (closed, for now)

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yo smilyn, how's it been?
I have a piece that I consider one of my better works that kinda got passed over for reviews when I posted it. Would love your thoughts. Its very dry humored, slow burn, but most really enjoy it.
Here it is:
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If that ain't ur thing ya can always check out me novel Animal. Which be awesome




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I'll be getting to all of these recent requests as soon as time opens up. :] Though, I don't think I'll be taking in any new requests at the moment for I'm already so behind. D:
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It's November 15th. :]]]]]]]]]]

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but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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*edit*

Request away folks.
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Hai Auntie ^_^ Ducky here!

Could you take a look at this for me? It's a short story that I recently rewrote and I'm quite pleased with so I just wanted to see what improvements I could make.

Thanks a million! I'd be glad to return the favour if you wish :)




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SmylinG,

You would be a big help for this. Let me know if you need anything looked at in turn, I feel like a bother xD




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Hey SmylinG,

Could I request a review? http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic91137.html
It would really help if you could give this a quick review. It's kind of long so I feel horrible asking for one - feel free to just ignore it if you don't have the time!

Still, I guess I just want to hear somebody's opinion on it and you seem to give brilliant reviews. :smt001

~MorningMist~




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You're doing reviews for food - AWESOME. Dude, totally check out the novel I'm writing ATM (up to chapter three already WOOP). Sorry I can't link it, the iPod can do many things but that and my laptops far away from me, it's called Revil on my profile - check it out (;

Kasim.




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Would you be amazing and review the two little bits of my novella I have put up? I'm at a bit of a loss as to precisely where I want to go all of a sudden. Post at the bottom of your review(s) if you have something you want me to do! <3 Thanks!
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PS I will love you forever if you review my story Maia (revised version!)
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I'll review something of yours in return :P




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Hi. I was wondering if you could review my chapter story Game On if it's not too much trouble. :D
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