You know you want one.

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LittlePetRock
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Fri Apr 16, 2010 2:08 am
LittlePetRock says... · Fri Apr 16, 2010 2:08 am
...Or two, or three...

What I will not review:
Twilight related fanfiction.
Another one of those freaking vampire love stories. :x
18+ rated work.


Note:
I'm horrible at reviewing poetry, but I will try.


Finished:
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Star light; star bright,
It is time to take flight.
Off I go through the dark of night.
All my hopes and dreams in sight.




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whatevr
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Fri Apr 16, 2010 2:54 am
whatevr says... · Fri Apr 16, 2010 2:54 am
Okay, sorry, but i really need my poem reviewed. *GLOMPS*

viewtopic.php?t=62037

Its an acrostic poem so if its choppy, blame the style :)

:elephant:
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Winterblossoms
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Fri Apr 16, 2010 8:20 am
Winterblossoms says... · Fri Apr 16, 2010 8:20 am
I want one. Yes I do. XD

viewtopic.php?t=62029

It's called Last, in general fiction. :) It's the second chapter, but if you feel the need to browse the first installment for the past sequence of events, here you go:

viewtopic.php?t=61814

There. :) Have a nice day!
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eldEr
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Sat Apr 17, 2010 4:26 pm
eldEr says... · Sat Apr 17, 2010 4:26 pm
I want some reviews on my revisions to my novel. This is a link to the novel as a whole, pick and choose what chapter(s) you want to review. It doesn't really matter which ones ;)

novel.php?id=36
Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurl.

got trans?




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NYCnightowl007
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Wed Apr 21, 2010 8:57 pm
NYCnightowl007 says... · Wed Apr 21, 2010 8:57 pm
Would you like to review my song? It'd be greatly appreciated. Thanks! :)

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Jas
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Thu Apr 22, 2010 1:06 am
Jas says... · Thu Apr 22, 2010 1:06 am
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/post693172.html#p693172

It's a love story that was supposed to be for Elinor Brynn's winter love contest but I was err...a little late :). If you could review it, I will send you a cookie! Thankies!
I am nothing
but a mouthful of 'sorry's, half-hearted
apologies that roll of my tongue, smoothquick, like 'r's
or maybe like pocket candy
that's just a bit too sweet.

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Sat Jun 17, 2023 10:21 am
DreamyAlice says... · Sat Jun 17, 2023 10:21 am
Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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