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shubhiloves2write wrote:Hi Dreamy,
I would like you to read my story,' Finding me back' in Hisorical fiction. I have posted both the prologu and chapter-1.I want for both.
Prologue: topic59289.html
Chaper-1: topic59610.html
I think you do all the reviews you are requested for.
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Hey, I only do one review at a time (maybe I should have specified that) but I'll be happy to review you prologue. Post here again in a day or two with chapter one, okay?


okay, the prologue is done!
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Done!
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Hey you said you will review my story's chapter-1 after some time.
Here's the link:Finding me back-Chapter 1

Let me know if there's something you want me to review.
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Done!
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Hey Dreamy 8)

Could you please review the first chapter of my story for me?
It's short, I noticed that you like short ones :wink:
As for your harshness, don't be, like, scary harsh! Don't be really nice though either, you get the idea?

Anyways, don't expect a masterpiece! :lol: :lol: hahahahaha! :lol: :lol: NO. ¬_¬

Seriously though. Don't. :wink:

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Done!
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Yo! Anyone want a review? I'm in need of something to do.
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Hey :)

You could review the next part of mine if you want :lol:

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I feel like a stalker here, but still, everyone likes a good stalker eh? :wink:

I've edited/completely changed the second chapter of my story. If you're interested, you could check it out? Don't feel like you have to though, I've got a good amount of reviews, I just thought that you might be interested.

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sort of done... will finish later.
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haha (:

Okay, thanks :)
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done for real!
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Okay, I'm reviving this topic! I'm aiming for at least 250 reviews by the end of June- and a Reviewer 1 badge. As I'm currently 50 reviews and 5 nominations away, I'm a bit desperate. I will review you!
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