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ToritheMonster
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Tue Mar 02, 2010 10:13 pm
ToritheMonster says... · Tue Mar 02, 2010 10:13 pm
Dreamy115 wrote:
shubhiloves2write wrote:Hi Dreamy,
I would like you to read my story,' Finding me back' in Hisorical fiction. I have posted both the prologu and chapter-1.I want for both.
Prologue: topic59289.html
Chaper-1: topic59610.html
I think you do all the reviews you are requested for.
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Hey, I only do one review at a time (maybe I should have specified that) but I'll be happy to review you prologue. Post here again in a day or two with chapter one, okay?


okay, the prologue is done!
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Wed Mar 03, 2010 9:28 pm
ToritheMonster says... · Wed Mar 03, 2010 9:28 pm
Done!
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Sat Mar 06, 2010 9:10 am
MiaParamore says... · Sat Mar 06, 2010 9:10 am
Hey you said you will review my story's chapter-1 after some time.
Here's the link:Finding me back-Chapter 1

Let me know if there's something you want me to review.
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Mon Mar 08, 2010 2:27 am
ToritheMonster says... · Mon Mar 08, 2010 2:27 am
Done!
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Thu Mar 18, 2010 7:45 pm
Sins says... · Thu Mar 18, 2010 7:45 pm
Hey Dreamy 8)

Could you please review the first chapter of my story for me?
It's short, I noticed that you like short ones :wink:
As for your harshness, don't be, like, scary harsh! Don't be really nice though either, you get the idea?

Anyways, don't expect a masterpiece! :lol: :lol: hahahahaha! :lol: :lol: NO. ¬_¬

Seriously though. Don't. :wink:

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xoxo Skins
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Thu Mar 18, 2010 11:44 pm
ToritheMonster says... · Thu Mar 18, 2010 11:44 pm
Done!
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Sun Mar 21, 2010 11:55 pm
ToritheMonster says... · Sun Mar 21, 2010 11:55 pm
Yo! Anyone want a review? I'm in need of something to do.
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Mon Mar 22, 2010 12:20 am
Sins says... · Mon Mar 22, 2010 12:20 am
Hey :)

You could review the next part of mine if you want :lol:

topic60526.html


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Mon Mar 22, 2010 10:11 pm
ToritheMonster says... · Mon Mar 22, 2010 10:11 pm
Done!
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Thu Apr 08, 2010 10:35 pm
Sins says... · Thu Apr 08, 2010 10:35 pm
I feel like a stalker here, but still, everyone likes a good stalker eh? :wink:

I've edited/completely changed the second chapter of my story. If you're interested, you could check it out? Don't feel like you have to though, I've got a good amount of reviews, I just thought that you might be interested.

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Sun Apr 11, 2010 3:18 pm
ToritheMonster says... · Sun Apr 11, 2010 3:18 pm
sort of done... will finish later.
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Sun Apr 11, 2010 10:16 pm
Sins says... · Sun Apr 11, 2010 10:16 pm
haha (:

Okay, thanks :)
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Mon Apr 12, 2010 2:00 am
ToritheMonster says... · Mon Apr 12, 2010 2:00 am
done for real!
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Tue Jun 08, 2010 1:39 am
ToritheMonster says... · Tue Jun 08, 2010 1:39 am
Okay, I'm reviving this topic! I'm aiming for at least 250 reviews by the end of June- and a Reviewer 1 badge. As I'm currently 50 reviews and 5 nominations away, I'm a bit desperate. I will review you!
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