The Angel's Gallery [Grand Reopening]

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TaylaChase
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Mon Jul 13, 2009 2:58 pm
TaylaChase says... · Mon Jul 13, 2009 2:58 pm
Could you please review this for me?

Reminiscence
Non-fiction

topic50718.html

Thanks!

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Angels-Symphony
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Mon Jul 13, 2009 3:44 pm
Angels-Symphony says... · Mon Jul 13, 2009 3:44 pm
Jetpack's review is complete ;)
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Angels-Symphony
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Mon Jul 13, 2009 11:43 pm
Angels-Symphony says... · Mon Jul 13, 2009 11:43 pm
Magnus, your piece has been reviewed ;)
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

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Angels-Symphony
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Tue Jul 14, 2009 4:39 am
Angels-Symphony says... · Tue Jul 14, 2009 4:39 am
moved

Will you please review this? It's for the 'Which Path to Take'
contest.

Dragon Tamer
Fantasy Fiction
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topic50758.html

Thanks!

~Tayla
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I moved this for wrong thread reasons:P
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.




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Angels-Symphony
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Wed Jul 15, 2009 12:26 am
Angels-Symphony says... · Wed Jul 15, 2009 12:26 am
Tnme's, Gsp's, Pinkangel's, Dakota's, Rlw's, and Incognito's critiques are complete ^^

*throws out cupcakes*

Any more ;) ?
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.




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Searria H.
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Wed Jul 15, 2009 2:33 am
Searria H. says... · Wed Jul 15, 2009 2:33 am
Hey! I really need help with part one and two of chapter one of "Through Hazel Eyes" posted under Adventure/Action Fiction.

Part one: topic43728.html

Part two: topic45104.html

"I neeeeeed hellllpppp Mrs. Paaaaaaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" - the babysitter from "The Incredibles" (can't remember her name.) I don't know if you've ever seen that movie, but that's what I feel like. I really need help!

Thanks bunches!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
-Sea-
'Let's eat Grandma!' or, 'Let's eat, Grandma!' Punctuation saves lives.

Reviews? You know you want one. :)

*Ribbit*




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Angels-Symphony
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Wed Jul 15, 2009 7:13 pm
Angels-Symphony says... · Wed Jul 15, 2009 7:13 pm
I'm on it ^^
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Angels-Symphony
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Thu Jul 16, 2009 7:17 pm
Angels-Symphony says... · Thu Jul 16, 2009 7:17 pm
Post some more guys ;)
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octocoffee
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Thu Jul 16, 2009 7:56 pm
octocoffee says... · Thu Jul 16, 2009 7:56 pm
Would you mind reviewing mine? It's Historical Fiction.

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Lil_Pau
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Sat Jul 18, 2009 1:47 pm
Lil_Pau says... · Sat Jul 18, 2009 1:47 pm
Hey, angel-symphony! Could you review this piece for me? It's for Rosey Unicorn's "Which Path To Take" contest. It's the 2nd part, so you'll have to read the 1st part...:P

Title: The Grotto Of Grottos (part 2)
Genre: Fantasy fiction

Link: post581686.html#581686

Please and thanks! :D
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Angels-Symphony
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Sun Jul 19, 2009 1:29 am
Angels-Symphony says... · Sun Jul 19, 2009 1:29 am
This is a reminder for myself.

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic51036.html

And I'm on it guys ^^
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.




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Angels-Symphony
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Sun Jul 19, 2009 3:37 pm
Angels-Symphony says... · Sun Jul 19, 2009 3:37 pm
Searria's and Tayla's are complete ^^

*Throws cupcakes*

Anyone else?
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.




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Angels-Symphony
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Sun Jul 19, 2009 7:00 pm
Angels-Symphony says... · Sun Jul 19, 2009 7:00 pm
Another reminder for myself:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic50862.html
You cannot dream yourself into a character; you must hammer and forge yourself into one.

The writer, when he is also an artist, is someone who admits what others don't dare reveal.




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200397
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Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:02 am
200397 says... · Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:02 am
Hey, Shina! Can you review this for me?

Vindicated

It's Other Fiction, rated PG-13.

:D

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Maki-Chan
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Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:25 am
Maki-Chan says... · Mon Jul 20, 2009 1:25 am
I really need to have my story reviewed especially my newest chapters 3-5



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it's a fafiction about Silent Hill. You don't really need to know anything about it. I really just need my chapters reviewed ^_^
check out my deviantart account ^_^
http://maki121.deviantart.com/

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