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PhoenixBishop
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Fri Feb 27, 2009 1:37 am
PhoenixBishop says... · Fri Feb 27, 2009 1:37 am
Never mind minne I have enough reviews on it now.
This is one little planet in one tiny solar system in a galaxy that’s barely out of its diapers. I’m old, Dean. Very old. So I invite you to contemplate how insignificant I find you.

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Lord Anzius
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Fri Feb 27, 2009 8:27 pm
Lord Anzius says... · Fri Feb 27, 2009 8:27 pm
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic40424.html
Prologue - Ashurbanipal
Historical fiction

And the first chapter (I had to post it in two parts I hope you don't mind :shock: )
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic41214.html chapter 1 part 1
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic43712.html chapter 1 part 2
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KailaMarie
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Thu Mar 05, 2009 1:20 am
KailaMarie says... · Thu Mar 05, 2009 1:20 am
Sorry I haven't checked this for a while. I'll get to it all as soon as I can!
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KailaMarie
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Sat Mar 14, 2009 6:28 pm
KailaMarie says... · Sat Mar 14, 2009 6:28 pm
Ok, I'm all updated except for Lord Anzius. I'll get to that one as soon as I can. (:
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KailaMarie
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Tue Mar 31, 2009 7:52 pm
KailaMarie says... · Tue Mar 31, 2009 7:52 pm
Ok, I'm all caught up! Anyone else?
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KailaMarie
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Tue Apr 07, 2009 7:51 pm
KailaMarie says... · Tue Apr 07, 2009 7:51 pm
Somebody please?
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MuffinWriter
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Fri Apr 10, 2009 9:10 pm
MuffinWriter says... · Fri Apr 10, 2009 9:10 pm
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If you don't mind. It's a poem. Not very good, but hopefully you won't die while reading it.
Why does believe have the word lie in it?

*like the line in my dp? Check out my one poem: "In Repair". I made the dp to match the poem.




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MuffinWriter
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Fri Apr 10, 2009 9:12 pm
MuffinWriter says... · Fri Apr 10, 2009 9:12 pm
Oh, and please do nit-pick the best you can for the poem. I know it may not be easy, but its a poor poem so you'll find plenty of things.
Why does believe have the word lie in it?

*like the line in my dp? Check out my one poem: "In Repair". I made the dp to match the poem.




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wiccaryan
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Fri Apr 10, 2009 10:48 pm
wiccaryan says... · Fri Apr 10, 2009 10:48 pm
I was wondering if you could review the first chapters of my book?

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i would like as much detail as you see fit to give it, and please please be honest

Thanks so much xx
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KailaMarie
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Sun Apr 12, 2009 11:56 pm
KailaMarie says... · Sun Apr 12, 2009 11:56 pm
MuffinWriter- finished!

wiccaryan- started it, but ran out of time, I'll finish when I get a chance. Sorry!
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LisaMCooper
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Tue Jun 23, 2009 12:48 am
LisaMCooper says... · Tue Jun 23, 2009 12:48 am
Oooooo!! Will you critique my story, Carnelian? It is in Historical fiction. I would very much appreciate it if you would. Thank you so much. ^^

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pinkangel54123
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Sun Jun 28, 2009 12:19 am
pinkangel54123 says... · Sun Jun 28, 2009 12:19 am
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Review this one! It makes me happy and hopefully you'll like it.
Want a heavenly review?

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KailaMarie
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Mon Jul 20, 2009 3:55 pm
KailaMarie says... · Mon Jul 20, 2009 3:55 pm
Ok, I finished! Sorry it took so long, I forgot to check this thread.

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Rascalover
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Fri Jul 24, 2009 5:05 am
Rascalover says... · Fri Jul 24, 2009 5:05 am
Can you review chapter ten of my romantic fiction piece Let Me Love You?

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Who needs a review? :) http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38078.html




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KailaMarie
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Sun Jul 26, 2009 9:20 pm
KailaMarie says... · Sun Jul 26, 2009 9:20 pm
All done. Anyone else?
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