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KailaMarie · 2009-01-28T22:44:39Z

I want to get my review count up! I'll review pretty much anything, but just a warning, my reviews for poetry won't be very good because I'm not really used to poetry. I will give you my opinion on it, though. Just gimme a link and tell me how rough you want me to be. Also, tell me if you want me to nit pick because sometimes I worry if that annoys people, but I can if you want me to. (:

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Fri Feb 27, 2009 1:37 am

PhoenixBishop says... · Fri Feb 27, 2009 1:37 am

Never mind minne I have enough reviews on it now.

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Fri Feb 27, 2009 8:27 pm

Lord Anzius says... · Fri Feb 27, 2009 8:27 pm

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic40424.html
Prologue - Ashurbanipal
Historical fiction

And the first chapter (I had to post it in two parts I hope you don't mind :shock:

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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic41214.html chapter 1 part 1
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic43712.html chapter 1 part 2

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Thu Mar 05, 2009 1:20 am

KailaMarie says... · Thu Mar 05, 2009 1:20 am

Sorry I haven't checked this for a while. I'll get to it all as soon as I can!

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Sat Mar 14, 2009 6:28 pm

KailaMarie says... · Sat Mar 14, 2009 6:28 pm

Ok, I'm all updated except for Lord Anzius. I'll get to that one as soon as I can. (:

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Tue Mar 31, 2009 7:52 pm

KailaMarie says... · Tue Mar 31, 2009 7:52 pm

Ok, I'm all caught up! Anyone else?

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Tue Apr 07, 2009 7:51 pm

KailaMarie says... · Tue Apr 07, 2009 7:51 pm

Somebody please?

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Fri Apr 10, 2009 9:10 pm

MuffinWriter says... · Fri Apr 10, 2009 9:10 pm

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If you don't mind. It's a poem. Not very good, but hopefully you won't die while reading it.

Why does believe have the word lie in it?

*like the line in my dp? Check out my one poem: "In Repair". I made the dp to match the poem.

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Fri Apr 10, 2009 9:12 pm

MuffinWriter says... · Fri Apr 10, 2009 9:12 pm

Oh, and please do nit-pick the best you can for the poem. I know it may not be easy, but its a poor poem so you'll find plenty of things.

Why does believe have the word lie in it?

*like the line in my dp? Check out my one poem: "In Repair". I made the dp to match the poem.

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Fri Apr 10, 2009 10:48 pm

wiccaryan says... · Fri Apr 10, 2009 10:48 pm

I was wondering if you could review the first chapters of my book?

topic46539.html

i would like as much detail as you see fit to give it, and please please be honest

Thanks so much xx

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Sun Apr 12, 2009 11:56 pm

KailaMarie says... · Sun Apr 12, 2009 11:56 pm

MuffinWriter- finished!

wiccaryan- started it, but ran out of time, I'll finish when I get a chance. Sorry!

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Tue Jun 23, 2009 12:48 am

LisaMCooper says... · Tue Jun 23, 2009 12:48 am

Oooooo!! Will you critique my story, Carnelian? It is in Historical fiction. I would very much appreciate it if you would. Thank you so much. ^^

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Sun Jun 28, 2009 12:19 am

pinkangel54123 says... · Sun Jun 28, 2009 12:19 am

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Review this one! It makes me happy and hopefully you'll like it.

Want a heavenly review?

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Mon Jul 20, 2009 3:55 pm

KailaMarie says... · Mon Jul 20, 2009 3:55 pm

Ok, I finished! Sorry it took so long, I forgot to check this thread.

Anyway, anyone else need a review?

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