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BigBadBear
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Mon Jul 21, 2008 12:08 am
BigBadBear says... · Mon Jul 21, 2008 12:08 am
Done! I'm now totally free. Please send in your links. I'm available right now. Send me everything... but fantasy. Please. No more of that.

-Jared

PS: I'll do better if it is a series. I like series.

-Jared
Just write -- the rest of life will follow.

Would love help on this.




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niccy_v
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Mon Jul 21, 2008 1:21 am
niccy_v says... · Mon Jul 21, 2008 1:21 am
Mine's a kind of series... well there's half 1 and half 2 which i haven't broken down into chapters yet. Take a look:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic33253.html
Writing gives my life purpose




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BigBadBear
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Mon Jul 21, 2008 2:37 am
BigBadBear says... · Mon Jul 21, 2008 2:37 am
Done.
Just write -- the rest of life will follow.

Would love help on this.




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Bittersweet
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Mon Jul 21, 2008 4:38 am
Bittersweet says... · Mon Jul 21, 2008 4:38 am
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Have fun. o.o Heh.
eviscerate your fragile frame
spill it out in ragged form
a thousand different versions of yourself.




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Conrad Rice
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Mon Jul 28, 2008 1:23 am
Conrad Rice says... · Mon Jul 28, 2008 1:23 am
Would you so kindly please? http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic33308.html
Garrus Vakarian is my homeboy.




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BigBadBear
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Mon Jul 28, 2008 4:09 am
BigBadBear says... · Mon Jul 28, 2008 4:09 am
Done, Conrad.
Just write -- the rest of life will follow.

Would love help on this.




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StellaThomas
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Mon Jul 28, 2008 6:04 pm
StellaThomas says... · Mon Jul 28, 2008 6:04 pm
Oh Jaaaaaared?

Can you review my piece "Faerie Wings" for Cal's character contest. It's only the first one, and it's very short.
"Stella. You were in my dream the other night. And everyone called you Princess." -Lauren2010




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BigBadBear
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Mon Jul 28, 2008 10:18 pm
BigBadBear says... · Mon Jul 28, 2008 10:18 pm
Done, Stella.

Any more?

-Jared
Just write -- the rest of life will follow.

Would love help on this.




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BigBadBear
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Tue Jul 29, 2008 5:42 pm
BigBadBear says... · Tue Jul 29, 2008 5:42 pm
*bump* Give me critiques, YWSers. Now. I'm bored out of my mind.

-Jared
Just write -- the rest of life will follow.

Would love help on this.




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Sportgurl46
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Tue Jul 29, 2008 10:44 pm
Sportgurl46 says... · Tue Jul 29, 2008 10:44 pm
ok, so i badly want this critiqued, and can't seem to find anyone to do it, so if you could help me that would be just absolutely amazing :) i am trying to see if it is good enough for me to say it's finished. it's poetry so i hope that's ok.
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omg lol thx HD!




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BigBadBear
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Wed Jul 30, 2008 12:45 am
BigBadBear says... · Wed Jul 30, 2008 12:45 am
Done.

Next?
Just write -- the rest of life will follow.

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PenguinAttack
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Wed Jul 30, 2008 2:49 am
PenguinAttack says... · Wed Jul 30, 2008 2:49 am
Be a good Boy. ^^

I'd really appreciate a crit on this: post398962.html#398962 if you could? It's for a contest due soon, so be harsh and enjoy. ^^

*Hearts* Le Penguin.
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BigBadBear
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Wed Jul 30, 2008 11:31 pm
BigBadBear says... · Wed Jul 30, 2008 11:31 pm
Done, Penguin.

Next, please.

-Jared
Just write -- the rest of life will follow.

Would love help on this.




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Clo
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Fri Aug 01, 2008 12:45 am
Clo says... · Fri Aug 01, 2008 12:45 am
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Jared, you are my knight in shining... bear fur. ^_^
How am I not myself?




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Lethero
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Sun Aug 03, 2008 5:23 am
Lethero says... · Sun Aug 03, 2008 5:23 am
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Hi 3b. I need a review too if you have the time, please. I'm pretty sure I can trust your reviews like I can trust Jabbs.

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