Free Reviews?

54 posts1, 2, 3, 4
User avatar
Gender Male
Points 7740
Reviews 713
Done! I'm now totally free. Please send in your links. I'm available right now. Send me everything... but fantasy. Please. No more of that.

-Jared

PS: I'll do better if it is a series. I like series.

-Jared
Just write -- the rest of life will follow.

Would love help on this.




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 890
Reviews 135
Mine's a kind of series... well there's half 1 and half 2 which i haven't broken down into chapters yet. Take a look:

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic33253.html
Writing gives my life purpose




User avatar
Gender Male
Points 7740
Reviews 713
Done.
Just write -- the rest of life will follow.

Would love help on this.




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 3214
Reviews 137
topic30972.html

Have fun. o.o Heh.
eviscerate your fragile frame
spill it out in ragged form
a thousand different versions of yourself.




User avatar
Gender Male
Points 15698
Reviews 369
Would you so kindly please? http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic33308.html
Garrus Vakarian is my homeboy.




User avatar
Gender Male
Points 7740
Reviews 713
Done, Conrad.
Just write -- the rest of life will follow.

Would love help on this.




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 53415
Reviews 1125
Oh Jaaaaaared?

Can you review my piece "Faerie Wings" for Cal's character contest. It's only the first one, and it's very short.
"Stella. You were in my dream the other night. And everyone called you Princess." -Lauren2010




User avatar
Gender Male
Points 7740
Reviews 713
Done, Stella.

Any more?

-Jared
Just write -- the rest of life will follow.

Would love help on this.




User avatar
Gender Male
Points 7740
Reviews 713
*bump* Give me critiques, YWSers. Now. I'm bored out of my mind.

-Jared
Just write -- the rest of life will follow.

Would love help on this.




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 890
Reviews 60
ok, so i badly want this critiqued, and can't seem to find anyone to do it, so if you could help me that would be just absolutely amazing :) i am trying to see if it is good enough for me to say it's finished. it's poetry so i hope that's ok.
topic31313.html
omg lol thx HD!




User avatar
Gender Male
Points 7740
Reviews 713
Done.

Next?
Just write -- the rest of life will follow.

Would love help on this.




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 1330
Reviews 900
Be a good Boy. ^^

I'd really appreciate a crit on this: post398962.html#398962 if you could? It's for a contest due soon, so be harsh and enjoy. ^^

*Hearts* Le Penguin.
I like you as an enemy, but I love you as a friend.




User avatar
Gender Male
Points 7740
Reviews 713
Done, Penguin.

Next, please.

-Jared
Just write -- the rest of life will follow.

Would love help on this.




User avatar
Gender Female
Points 6517
Reviews 402
post402904.html#402904

Jared, you are my knight in shining... bear fur. ^_^
How am I not myself?




User avatar
Gender Male
Points 1544
Reviews 169
topic33828.html

Hi 3b. I need a review too if you have the time, please. I'm pretty sure I can trust your reviews like I can trust Jabbs.

Boon the Werewolf
Fly, Fight, Win . . . in Air, Space, and Cyberspace.
-Air Force Mission Statement-

Integrity First
Service Before Self
Excellence In All We Do
~Air Force Core Values~

*Lethero*



This report, by its very length, defends itself against the risk of being read.
— Winston Churchill