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Tue Apr 28, 2009 5:56 pm
Incognito says...



Hello there.
I am posting up a forum because lately I have been in those extravgant reviewing moods and I am determinded to become an Instructor by the time my brithday comes around. I can only do that with your cooperation.

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If you need an incredibly detailed review you have come to the right place.
When I review I disect your story into five parts:
I. Nit-Picking ---> All things I notice while I am reading the piece.
II. Grammar and Punctuation ---> I comment on your grammar and punctuation here. ;)
III. Character Development ---> About your character's and my impression on theire physical and emotions. How you could add more detail, at more description, etc.
IV. Writing Format ---> About your style of writing (despcriptive, non-decriptive), proper use of sentence structure, fluency and format for dialogue and paragraphs.
and finally,
V. Overall ---> I comment on the actual idea of the story, tweaks I would make, things I would leave the same, impressions that were made. Things like that.

I will review anything, including Art and Photography. I cannot say that the reviews for Poetry will be the best because unfortunately, I have no prior experience to poetry, but if you feel like you need a review for that in another kind of stand point, then I am here!

So post of the link with the title of the story, and I will tell you once it is finished. ;)
~Incognito
'Everyone is entitled to be stupid, some just abuse the priviledge.'





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Wed Apr 29, 2009 1:13 pm
Octave says...



Hi! Kara here. Anyway, I was wondering if I could ask you for a review? >.<"

The title of the story is Disabilities and it's Romance/Humor

http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic47378.html

:D

Good luck in your quest to be come an instructor! If I can do anything for you let me know. ^^
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Thu Apr 30, 2009 12:58 am
Incognito says...



I would love to read this and I will review it as soon as possible. ;)
And you can't help me much, only of course asking for reviews when you need 'em.

~Incognito
'Everyone is entitled to be stupid, some just abuse the priviledge.'





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Sun May 03, 2009 3:26 pm
Incognito says...



Is there anyone else?
'Everyone is entitled to be stupid, some just abuse the priviledge.'





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Thu May 07, 2009 11:12 pm
Incognito says...



No takers? I kind of feel disheartened here.

~Incognito
'Everyone is entitled to be stupid, some just abuse the priviledge.'





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Thu May 14, 2009 10:26 pm
Incognito says...



:O
I feel like I am talking to meself now.
Next person who requests a review gets 200 points!

~Incognito
'Everyone is entitled to be stupid, some just abuse the priviledge.'





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Sat May 23, 2009 9:02 pm
Rosendorn says...



topic48428.html

A Dark Elf's Tale
Fantasy

Shred it. :D
A writer is a world trapped in a person— Victor Hugo

Ink is blood. Paper is bandages. The wounded press books to their heart to know they're not alone.





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Wed Aug 26, 2009 7:15 pm
KayKel16 says...



Hey! I have a new story, are you willing to critique for me once again? I hope so!(: I might add, it's a romance, short story, type thinga mah jig :D

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Thu Aug 27, 2009 5:21 pm
Incognito says...



Oh dear! I forgot this forum existed! xD
I would love to review that kaykel. I shall get started on it ASAP. ;)
~Incognito
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Mon Jun 12, 2023 11:58 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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