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Sat Jul 18, 2009 7:24 pm
tinny says...



I lost my other thread, oops. Time for a new one? Oh, there it is as a possibly related thread. Apparently I used the same title last time, haha.

Summer is here and I'm struggling to find a job, so while I search for employment I might as well use all this free time productively :D

Happy to critique
-Action/Adventure
-Science Fiction
-Fantasy
-Other Fiction

Willing to critique
-Historical Fiction (bearing in mind I will be of zero use regarding historical accuracy)
-Romance

Will not critique
-Poetry
-Scripts
-Lyrics
-Fanfiction
-Military/War-based

Examples of past reviews: one, two, three.

I'll look at anything regardless of rating. Although please be aware that if something is too long, or already has a reasonable number of critiques, I may turn it down. Otherwise anything else is fine ^___^ Just leave the a link with the title, and I will get it done as soon as I can. At the moment I'm only going to have three spaces open at once, as it stops me from getting overwhelmed by long intimidating lists. I aim to get all reviews done within a week, but it may take longer if I'm busy/ill/tired/combination of all three.

To do list
Mission Zero (2) -- pretty crazy


Done!
Meimei and the Emperor -- octocoffee
Other (Part A) -- Bickazer
Last edited by tinny on Sun Aug 30, 2009 1:55 am, edited 5 times in total.
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Sat Jul 18, 2009 7:32 pm
octocoffee says...



If you would review mine, that would be greatly appreciated. :D It's Historical Fiction, set in China.

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Sun Jul 19, 2009 9:10 pm
Bickazer says...



Would you take a look at the first part of a science fiction short story, "Other"?

topic51062.html

Thanking you very much in advance. ^^
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Fri Jul 31, 2009 4:11 pm
tinny says...



Done and done~

More please :3
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Wed Aug 26, 2009 6:31 pm
Pretty Crazy says...



Could you give me your opinion on this:
Mission Zero 2
topic52175.html
That is what I need the review on, there is also a first part that I recomend you read first so you have some clue what I'm rambling about.
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Sun Aug 30, 2009 1:52 am
tinny says...



Sorry, Pretty Crazy, I only just noticed your post! I've been getting so lost and such with the switch-over to the new YWS XD
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Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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