Young Writers Society

Hello; I am Meagan the Empress and I am looking for something, anything, to get my hands on and critique. No charge; I just do it for the sake of doing it.

Queu of fabulousness
1. Dakota's novel
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I'd be happy to do
Science Fiction
Action/ Adventure Fiction
Fantasy
Other Fiction
Romantic Fiction
Horror/ Supernatural Fiction
Non-Ficiton
Any Essays
Scripts
Fanfiction
Historical Fiction
Poetry (will make a valiant attempt)
Parody
Art/Photography
Other
I will do any lenght of work; and If you have, say, 900,000 parts of a story up I will critique all of them.


What you can expect from me: the very basics of grammar (forgot a period? need a new paragraph) sentence structure and word usage, dialogue and setting, pacing, character development and description, and probably anything you think you need help with.
But I'm no grammar monkey-- there's probably a ton of mistakes in this post.

I am, first and foremost, a reader and lover of stories; not a linguistics teacher and not a sadistic critiquer. I won't upbraid you for a misplaced comma.

Here's an example of my work:
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Hey Empress,
It's great your up and ready to do reviews so recently after joining. I just wanted to say hi and ask for a rain check I'll be posting a long novel later this month (only the first half) and I'd be overjoyed if you would be willing to check it out for me. If we ever get the point system back I will definitely donate to anyone willing to tackle my novel.

Thanks,
~Dakota

Thank you dakota!
I am pretty new to this site but I have done a fair amount of reviews. I will definitely read your novel when it comes out and donations are not necessary. I don't know if I'll be able to finish it quickly; i just went to my first day of ninth grade and the homework seems pretty severe.

Hello fellow new person

I flew by and saw you'd go for some Action/Adventure fiction in the form of a novel. I've got just the sort of novel! I'd love ya if you took a peak at it (link in the description), and I'll review anything of yours in return

It isn't long enough to take you in to the end of September -- if you decide you like it -- so I shouldn't get in the way of Dakotak (she did ask first )

Thanks!

xunnanimus...
It is interesting; reading a 250 page book on the computer. I don't think I will ever do it again. Ever. For anyone. At least, not in practically one sitting (was up till one thirty.... ughh)

Is that because it's so good?

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