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Sun Sep 06, 2009 7:22 pm
Pretty Crazy says...



Hey roon! Welcome back!
I now have part four of my story on. Please review! :smt001
topic52595.html
Thank you
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Mon Sep 07, 2009 12:32 pm
afeefah says...



Hi again Roon! :smt003

Chapter 5 of my story is up! Please review it! Use the same link!

Thank you!

Afeefah :smt004
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Tue Sep 08, 2009 2:06 pm
roon says...



Done! More please? :D

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Tue Sep 08, 2009 7:49 pm
pudin.junidf says...



Hey Roon!!

I found you!! so do you want to review this please? Is an extract from my novel and it's called Red Vendetta.

here's the link
topic52724.html

Thanks so much for the help.
Les sanglots longs
Des violons
De l'autonne
Blessent mon coeur
D'une langueur
Monotone.

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Thu Sep 10, 2009 9:28 pm
roon says...



Done and done! More... I feed on reviews... mwahahaha! Ahem... Seriously, I love to review!

~ Roon
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Thu Sep 24, 2009 9:53 am
afeefah says...



Rooooon! :D

Chapter 6 please? Same link.

Afeefah
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Thu Sep 24, 2009 10:30 pm
pudin.junidf says...



HI Roon!!

Here again. I was wondering if you could review this poem for me.
It's called nothing can be compared to you. I need as much help as I can get with this one.

topic53241.html

Thanks so much for your help.
Les sanglots longs
Des violons
De l'autonne
Blessent mon coeur
D'une langueur
Monotone.

Verlaine





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Fri Sep 25, 2009 9:11 pm
brassnbridle says...



Hi, I've just recently posted my first story and have no idea what to expect as far as how good it might me. Would you mind reviewing it? It's fantasy, the first chapter of what might be a book. If you have time- no rush.

topic53168.html
If there's a book you really want to read, but it hasn't been written yet, then you must write it.~Toni Morrison

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Sun Oct 04, 2009 10:12 pm
pudin.junidf says...



Roon, my good friend Roon, whom I'm flooding with my works!!

First, thanks for all the others.

Second, could you review this poem for me please. **Puppy eyes**

viewtopic.php?t=53456
Name: The War Wind

Thanks so much!!
Les sanglots longs
Des violons
De l'autonne
Blessent mon coeur
D'une langueur
Monotone.

Verlaine





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Mon Jun 12, 2023 11:40 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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