Young Writers Society

Hey! I'm Blu! Works that need to be torn to shreds *coughcough* hrm, critiqued, post here!

Please keep in mind that I try not to be too harsh, but (according to my friends) I can get pretty nasty when it comes to commas......

Will review
-Any type of poetry
-Fantasy fiction
-Science fiction
-Romantic fiction (well, sometimes... just give it to me anyway)
-Action/adventure
-Other fiction

Would rather not review
-Lyrics (just... don't. You'll regret it)
-Scripts
-Historical fiction
-Art and Photography (unless you want me gushing about how much I loved it)
-Works longer than 1,750 words long. (yes, I get lazy, I'm dreadfully sorry)

Instructions

Post your link here!

You may begin.

Oh, blue!
It may be a smidget over 1500, but It's not that long!
viewtopic.php?t=53343
1,658 words for your convenience.
It's called scarecrow. I hope you enjoy.

Awesome job, empress! Just, please stop abusing the semi-colon. Please.

Keep it coming, people!

I have another one. And theres probably more comma abuse in this post. Sorry.
post610174.html#p610174
A little under 1500 words.
Principle Mackenzie

Review finished! Great job, empress!

Any other volunteers?

Is he real?
I know it's not really long and I have a few other reviews, but I just want to know what you think.
It's Fantasy Fiction.
Thanks!

Hello.

If you have the time I would really appreciate a review on my poem. It's Narrative Poetry.
topic53584.html
Thanks!
~Mo.

Sorry for the wait! IT is finished now.

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-ALICE