Young Writers Society

My "specialty" when it comes to reviews is grammar. I'll pick out all your grammar mistakes, if there are any. I'll do anything from quick critiques to line-by-line critiques. When you post please include how in-depth you would like me to go.

I will not review:
-Fantasy, in most cases
-Sci-Fi
-FanFiction, in most cases
-Lyrics

I will review:
-Historical Fiction
-Scripts
-Other Fiction
-Romantic Fiction
-Non-Fiction
-Action/Adventure Fiction

I will do my best with:
-Poetry
-Art & Photography

These are links to some works that I have reviewed in-depth:
topic42593.html
topic42074.html
post493745.html?highlight=#493745
post497920.html?highlight=#497920
post494432.html?highlight=#494432

These are links to some quick reviews that I have done:
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post494036.html?highlight=#494036

So, if you would like a review please either reply in this thread or PM me. Please use this format for replies:
Title:
Genre:
Link:

Thanks!
-Winter
EDIT: I forgot to mention that reviews are free! No need to donate points or review in return.

Title: Untitled Chapter One (I need help on this, so if you have any suggestions)
Genre: Other Fiction
Link: post505446.html#505446

I would really like an in-depth review, grammar, puncuation, flow, character development, and entertainment value. (Tell me honestly if you are interested in reading more or if you're just plain bored). I will happily review anything of yours that you need a critique on, just PM me. Thanks!

Moriah Leila: Done! Nice work.
I don't need a critique on anything right now, but thank you for the offer! Reviews are free.

Hi Winter!!

Could you please review this little poetry piece?

Here:
Threnody

Thanks so much!

Peace, Love and Sugar Packets~
Forever Threnody

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