Young Writers Society

I'll review mostly anything you throw at me. Just make sure it's not heavy...

(1) Level:
I'll review on how detailed you want it: overall, line-by-line, etc.

(2) Kinds:
I will do anything but review lyrics and poems since I'm horrible at even writing them, much less reviewing them.

(3) In Return:
You get a review. (No worries, you don't have to pay me!)

How to contact me:
(1) Post here
OR
(2) PM me

If you have any questions, just ask.

DON'T send me a billion messages saying "Where's my story?" or "Why haven't you given it back to me yet?" I have schoolwork, and rarely go on the computer during the week, even though I'm logged on. But I am here on the weekend.

DO fill out this list though and put it at the top of your post.
Title:
One-Sentence Summary:
How far you are with the story/chapter?:

Do you want a Beta?:
Do you already have a Beta?:

Are you having problems with the story?:
If so, list them here:

Chapter or Story?:
(If a Chapter) What number?:
Does this particular chapter/story have a title?:
Or are you struggling with a name?:

Other:
(I also do advanced critiques for an overall story, novel, or even novella. And you don't have to pay 500 points to post it in the Advanced Critiques thread either! All you have to do is send me a link to your work.)

I would really like to hear form somebody!

Nobody wants any critiques?

If you'd like more business, dear, I'd suggest having a shorter list that people have to put at the top of their post. Maybe just a title, link, and summary? Otherwise people can go elsewhere and not have to do anything but put a link.

You can root around in my portfolio if you want something to look at.

Title: Viruses vs. Spysweepers
One-Sentence Summary: It's basically about a Virus who is in a battle against the Spysweepers
How far you are with the story/chapter?: There isn't any other chapter.

Do you want a Beta?: No.
Do you already have a Beta?: No.

Are you having problems with the story?: Yes.
If so, list them here: [spoiler]I'm not sure if the death makes sense at the end of the story.[/spoiler]

Chapter or Story?: Story.
Does this particular chapter/story have a title?: Yes.
Or are you struggling with a name?: No.

Where's the link?

Oh, sorry. The link is there now.

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