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Sun Mar 08, 2009 2:14 pm
Master_Yoda says...



After a couple of months of reviewing random stuff, I have decided to start one of these thing-a-majigs. So If you want a review from me, just post here. It would also be helpful if you told me what aspect of writing you want me to focus my reviews on.

My specialties include:
Science Fiction
Fantasy
Characterization
Dialogue
General Concorde

I will not review:
Romance
Love Poems
Fan fiction

So, anyone want a review from a Star Wars freak?

Have a good one! :)
Last edited by Master_Yoda on Fri Apr 17, 2009 1:01 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
-- Robert Frost

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Sat Mar 14, 2009 5:54 pm
Master_Yoda says...



Come on! doesn't anyone want to give me anything to review?
#TNT

The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
-- Robert Frost

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Sun Apr 05, 2009 4:37 pm
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Dreamworx95 says...



Thanks for the PM, Clever-boy. There is actually something I'd like to get more reviews on. It's fantasy fiction, it's short (prologue) and I've made some revisions to it. Here's the link: post512348.html#512348

Thanks again.

Worx.





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Sun Apr 05, 2009 8:02 pm
Master_Yoda says...



Okay, I'm done with that one. :)

Any more?
#TNT

The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
-- Robert Frost

I review your reviews: viewtopic.php?f=188&t=94522





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Tue Apr 07, 2009 10:44 pm
MagnusBane says...



topic46174.html

Here's the prologue to one of my stories. I would love if you reviewed it!
“Don't tell me the moon is shining; show me the glint of light on broken glass.” Anton Chekhov





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Wed Apr 08, 2009 5:01 am
Helpful McHelpfulpants says...



I'd appreciate a review for the beginning of my fantasy novel, The Court Of Gilded Birds:

topic45981.html
Nunc lac est bibendum.





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Sun Apr 12, 2009 1:53 pm
Master_Yoda says...



Hi there,

Sorry, it's taken me so long to get to these reviews, but I had no internet from Wednesday last week to last night.

Anyway, I've done yours Magnus, and hope it helped.

Helpful, I'll try to get yours done either tonight or tomorrow. :)
#TNT

The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
-- Robert Frost

I review your reviews: viewtopic.php?f=188&t=94522





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Sun Apr 12, 2009 2:09 pm
Hecate says...



http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic46571.html

Since you have offered your services, I thought, why don't I, give you the first chapter to my new sci-fi story. Hah. Hope you like it. Although, the first chapter? Not as good as the rest. THANKS IN ADVANCE!
Sorry, I didn't mean to yell...much. See ya ;)





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Sun Apr 12, 2009 8:40 pm
Master_Yoda says...



Helpful McHelpfulpants, yours is done. :)

stelagineva, I'll see if I can get to yours tomorrow. ;)
#TNT

The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
-- Robert Frost

I review your reviews: viewtopic.php?f=188&t=94522





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Fri Apr 17, 2009 1:00 pm
Master_Yoda says...



I've reopened shop! :)

Any more reviews?
#TNT

The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
-- Robert Frost

I review your reviews: viewtopic.php?f=188&t=94522





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Wed Jun 07, 2023 8:23 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries, if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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