Young Writers Society

Hello everyone, I'm Fortuna and I'm particularly interested in fantasy stories.
I'm a horrid little nit-picker and very detail oriented, and rest assured that I will tear your piece to shreads in an attempt to make it better So come on, I really want to know what people have here!

Just as a rule, I expect no complaning for harsh criticisms. We're all young adults here, we can handle it if someone doesn't think our story is 'the best thing ever'. Publishers aren't going to be nice, but I generally am, or at least I try to be.

As a promise, I WILL get to every story that's sent my way, but it may take some time, especially if it's during a school semester.

Thanks, now let's get started!

In progress:
The End of Time


Finished:
Mama's all that matters

Mama's all that matters.

It's a short story, rated PG-13 for some gore. And it's [supposed to be] really sad. Thing is, I want to make ti as sad as possible, so if you could please comment on how you think that'd be possible as well I'd be much obliged:)

Thanks in advanced!

Could you take a look at the first chapter of my story "The End of Time"? It's a bit...on the long side, but I'll feel happy to review any of your writing in exchange once you finish. Not until after this Saturday though because that's when I take the SAT subject tests.

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