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Tue Nov 25, 2008 10:30 pm
Princess says...



Okay guys.. I am having some difficulties for picking pieces to review.. I love to review all poetry and Romantic fiction.. Any takers?



I will also review any pieces and you want me to.. the reviews just wont be as good as they would be for poetry or romantic fiction. :D :D
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Fri Dec 05, 2008 11:11 pm
anti-pop says...



Here's a poem of mine I would love to have more critique on:

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It's not romantic, but I have one other poem you could read that is kind of romantic.....sort of.....ish. Haha.

Thanks!


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Tue Dec 09, 2008 2:42 am
Nutty says...



Hey! This is sort of... romantic...not really, more teenage-angst, but I think romance will play a part. Be aware, it's part three, you are welcome to read the first two, but no crits are needed. Also, if you don't want to, this should make alright sense on its own. ^^
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Sat Dec 13, 2008 2:07 am
Rascalover says...



romantic fiction: topic40060.html

review please???
tiff
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Who needs a review? :) http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic38078.html





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Thu Dec 18, 2008 1:57 pm
Princess says...



Whoops.. Sorry forgot about this..I shall get on them right away!!!
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Thu Dec 18, 2008 3:00 pm
Night Mistress says...



review this please.

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"I love you," she whispered in his ear, before taking his mouth with her own.

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Sun Apr 16, 2023 6:53 am
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If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.
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