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Will critt fantasy..



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Fri Oct 31, 2008 9:56 pm
Lord Anzius says...



I will crit anything witch has even one of the following recuirements:

1 Has magic
2 Has elves
3 has dwarfs
4 well you get it.
5 Humor.


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Mon Nov 17, 2008 8:13 pm
Sureal says...



Well, it doesn't have elves or magic or dwarves, but it is fantasy (but not high fantasy) so Chapter One of the Broken might be to your liking, or it might not.

If you do decide to review it, that'd be awesome, though. =)
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Sun Apr 16, 2023 6:46 am
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