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Thu Sep 04, 2008 5:50 am
Rubric says...



I do good reviews. They are detailed, precise and you want them.

I love to be one of the first to review a new piece, if you check my reviews you'll notice they're almost always the first on the list, because that is how I roll.

If you have a piece for fantasy fiction, scifi, adventure, other, historical fiction (alright anything but romance or poetry really) throw the link up here and I'd love to review it.

Especially if it is fresh meat.

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Thu Sep 04, 2008 4:33 pm
SunshineOrange says...



Ooh, this is how we roll.

-Placed her shades on.- ;)

Okay, can you review my Action/Adventure please? It's Chapter one, Part one!

Supahhh! Click here :D

Thank you, mucho!
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Thu Sep 11, 2008 12:21 am
Sureal says...



It's already had two reviews, but if you have the time, I'd love to hear your thoughts on Chapter One of The Broken. =)
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Thu Sep 11, 2008 5:14 am
Rubric says...



Damn skippy this is how we roll.

So yes I hope you two are happy with your respective reviews, In Sureal's I became a little vague, but that's okay because his piece was good enough to survive an indiscriminate sniping.

So yes, any more?
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Fri Sep 12, 2008 12:36 am
Bickazer says...



Would you please take a look at the first chapter of my science fiction story, "The Zenith Cycle"? :D You can find it in the science fiction forum (obviously). It's in desperate need of feedback...

No, you don't need to read the prologue to make sense of it either, but if you like, you can take a look at the prologue too. ^^
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Sat Sep 13, 2008 1:33 am
Sureal says...



Thanks for the review. It was incredibly helpful. =) I'm suprised you haven't had more requests. Consider this post to be like a testimonial, or something.

Anything you'd like me to review in return? I'm not a very good reviewer beyond grammar, to be honest, but I'll give anything you want a shot. (Well ... except poetry.)
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Mon Nov 03, 2008 3:38 am
Rubric says...



Can't say I'm not displeased with the lack of interest here peeps. The one request I make is that the work hasn't already been overreviewed already. This is for all those pieces tht simply don't get the attention they deserve, so if you want a review, just ask!

Oh and cheers Sureal, don't worry about the tit-for-tat business unless you actually see something of mine that you want to review :P, cheers for the testimonial too.

So yes, Rubric is hungry, where is his dinner!
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Mon Nov 03, 2008 8:25 pm
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1.1
1.2
1.3
1.4

I know 4 at once is a bit much, but please? :D No one's reviewed 1.4, yet. ^^
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Sun Apr 09, 2023 11:12 am
DreamyAlice says...



Hello, I am one of the res crew mods here on YWS. This is a message just to inform you that I will lock and archive this thread as it is not active anymore. We have to archive and lock the inactive threads to keep the forum organized so no worries, if you'd like to reopen it at any point in the future please contact a current resources moderator, we would be happy to reopen it for you ^-^

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