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Sun Oct 12, 2008 7:09 pm
jasmine12 says...



Hey people!
I just finished my novel, Untouched!!! (Awaiting points to post the rest)
I have way to much free time on my hands so now it’s time to do some intense reviewing.

What I will Critique
-Basically anything with vampires!!!
-Romance
-Any types of Fiction are always welcome and fun!!
-Historical Fiction
-*Of course multiple chapters

*Before you request, reread your writing. Sure, you may skip things, but always proofread before posting!!!


** I am best at finding holes in writing. For example, you say your MC is holding a glass full of water and then she does a back flip…Where did the water go?
----Obviously, that is a lame example.

Anyways, just post me a link and I’ll get to is as soon as I can.

--Jazz
"Sometimes the worst bad guy makes the best good guy." Nigel--Untouched
  





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Sun Oct 12, 2008 9:57 pm
happy-go-lucky says...



Oh yay! First reply!

topic37192.html

would you mind?

Thanks jasmine :D
"A dreamer is one who can only find his way by moonlight, and his punishment is that he sees the dawn before the rest of the world"
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Sun Oct 12, 2008 10:36 pm
jasmine12 says...



WOOO HOOO My first reply!!!

YAY!

Read and reviewed.

C'mon people. I can take on more than one!!!!
"Sometimes the worst bad guy makes the best good guy." Nigel--Untouched
  





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Wed Oct 15, 2008 9:13 pm
Twit says...



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and

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Please? :)
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Sun Apr 09, 2023 10:57 am
DreamyAlice says...



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