Will review for soup and curry

eldEr · 2014-01-29T01:44:09Z

Actually, no, I'll just review for free (I mean, if you wanted to throw in a photo of soup or curry, I'd be pretty down with that, too). As for the things I will review, and for how I review them! Short Stories: With these, I generally look at plot and character, and speak generally of writing style. I don't usually nitpick every spelling error and typo, but I do give tips on flow, voice, redundancy, and the like. Poetry: These, I'm only semi-decent at, but I will definitely do my absolute best. Usually, I look at the flow of the poem and the quality of the imagery, as well as originality. Novels: I will only review novels if I start from the first chapter/the first scene of the first chapter. I will not review Chapter 10 of your epic fantasy, simply because I don't think it's fair to judge everything based on the middle. Also, if you have one that already has multiple chapters/scenes posted, I'll do anything up to four chapter/scenes long. After that, please don't make a request. However, please do let me know when you post the next chapter by writing on my wall! :D What I will NOT do: - as mentioned earlier, the middle chapter or scene of a novel, or novels that have over four chapter posted already. - pieces that already have six or more thorough reviews. Mostly because there wouldn't be anything to add, and I'd feel like I'm just stealing from the other reviewers. That's it, that's all, folks. I have no genre preferences, no problems with content, and will review any rating. Thank you kindly, YWSers abroad.

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Wed Feb 19, 2014 10:05 pm

NerdBird says... · Wed Feb 19, 2014 10:05 pm

Hi there! Nerd Bird here!
I would greatly appreciate it if you could review the beginning of my first novel The Shifties!

You can find the first two chapters here:
http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/profile/NerdBird/portfolio/462161

Cant wait to read your feedback!

eldEr

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Tue Mar 04, 2014 3:42 pm

eldEr says... · Tue Mar 04, 2014 3:42 pm

All that needs to be done up to this point has been done

Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurl.

got trans?

DrFeelGood

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Tue Mar 25, 2014 4:03 pm

DrFeelGood says... · Tue Mar 25, 2014 4:03 pm

Hi Isha! Thanks a lot for reviewing my previous story. I would be glad if you review my short story, 'A Godly Affair'. It has received 5 reviews so far, but most of them are nitpicks on grammar. I request you to tell me about plot, narration and other aspects of the story which I can improve. Thanks!
A Godly Affair

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Tue Mar 25, 2014 6:00 pm

guineapiggirl says... · Tue Mar 25, 2014 6:00 pm

Hello! I'd love it if you could look at my story

Deciding to Die

I'm afraid I don't know how to attach a picture of soup...

eldEr

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Tue Mar 25, 2014 9:21 pm

eldEr says... · Tue Mar 25, 2014 9:21 pm

@guineapiggirl
@Gaurav009

Done and done!

Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurl.

got trans?

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Wed Mar 26, 2014 8:20 pm

rhiasofia says... · Wed Mar 26, 2014 8:20 pm

Hey Isha, I have a few poems that haven't gotten much attention. I could really use feedback, though. I'll leave you with options and let you pick

No Reviews
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The stars, dirt and dark

When the Robins lift

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Godly

Whatever interests you! Thanks.

Your head is a living forest full of song birds
~E. E. Cummings

eldEr

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Thu Mar 27, 2014 3:26 am

eldEr says... · Thu Mar 27, 2014 3:26 am

@rhiasofia
Done!

Guuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuurl.

got trans?

DrFeelGood

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Thu Mar 27, 2014 2:15 pm

DrFeelGood says... · Thu Mar 27, 2014 2:15 pm

Hello Isha, thanks a lot for your reviews. I have written the first chaper of my novel, which is an adaptation of my first short story (which you had review). I am facing some grammar issues and haven't got any review. I would also like to know whether I should continue writing it. And something about the plot. Hope you have a look at it.
The Perfect Thief (Working title) Chapter 1

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Fri Apr 04, 2014 4:33 pm

dancingwatermelon says... · Fri Apr 04, 2014 4:33 pm

Hi! Do you think you could possibly review my Introishthing to my novel? It's pretty short, but it's my first story, so I'd really like some feedback.

The House of Sand-- Introduction
Here it is, if you feel so inclined as to review it for me.

I should be posting the next bit later today.

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