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So, you want something reviewed? Well, fancy that, because I want to REVIEW!

Post the links to the work you would like me to review below. I'm afraid that I only review short stories and chapters. Early chapters only, please don't expect me to review your chapter 22, but I will happily read your first couple of chapters if you want chapter three reviewed.

I don't review poetry.

Any genre is accepted, but I reserve the right not to review if I find anything too hard-going or offensive.

If you request a review and I have not done so in a month, please send me a PM to remind me, because I've probably forgotten / been swamped by school work. If another month passes and still nothing, you are welcome to pester me as much as you like.

I'll post here when I'm done reviewing a piece, so please don't request a review if I'm drowning in requests.

If you want feedback on a specific aspect of your writing (flow, voice, characters, plot etc) please let me know, and I'll provide specific feedback.

Aside from that, I look forward to reading your work!
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Hiya!

I don't have anything specific in mind, but you're welcome to take a crack at anything in my portfolio. profile/Lucrezia/portfolio/461419




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@Lucrezia I reviewed Camp Tiburon (did I spell it right) because it had the least reviews. If you want something else down, give me a shout.

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Yep, you spelled it right (it's Spanish for shark, I believe). Thanks! :smt003




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Hey! Could you review this for me?

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Hi, could you review my poem?

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@lakegirls Done!
@LordGreenleaf I'm sorry but I don't review poetry. If you'd really like a review, I'll do it, but I can't guarantee how much help I'll be.
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Hey Sarah!
There is a prologue but it's not nessercary to read:
Warm as ice: Chapter 1, Illiete.
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Done! Next please!
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Hello! I was wondering if you'd like to review http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=108465 (Did I link it right? Apologies, I'm quite new here)




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Just review anything of mine ;P and I'll review your writing too in return.
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Mirfain26 is done!
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Hi there! Nerd Bird here!
I would greatly appreciate it if you could give the first chapter of my novel a once over :)

Chapter 1: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=108653
And if that tantalizes you enough...
Chapter 2: http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/work.php?id=108737

Much appreciated :)
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A Lover's Revenge (Title Pending) Chapter 1

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