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mystogan
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Sun Aug 26, 2012 7:38 pm
mystogan says... · Sun Aug 26, 2012 7:38 pm
I just started writing a new novel. I can guarantee it has a very unique writing style. It is fast paced and sure to give a lot of action. I would appreciate feedback, thanks in advance. Its called the Cascades of Time
work.php?id=97049




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Annii
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Thu Aug 30, 2012 10:18 pm
Annii says... · Thu Aug 30, 2012 10:18 pm
Hi,
I'd really appreciate a review on this please - work.php?id=97148




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o0OakageO0o
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Fri Aug 31, 2012 12:00 am
o0OakageO0o says... · Fri Aug 31, 2012 12:00 am
Could you guys please review my story, please? ^^ work.php?id=97119

Thank you so much! <3
I really want a psychiatric disorder named after me~ ♥




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Incandenza
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Sun Sep 02, 2012 9:29 am
Incandenza says... · Sun Sep 02, 2012 9:29 am
could you please review this,

work.php?id=97176

thanks a lot.
“There's good self-consciousness, and then there's toxic, paralyzing, raped-by-psychic-Bedouins self-consciousness.”
― David Foster Wallace




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chazbc4
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Sun Sep 02, 2012 11:49 pm
chazbc4 says... · Sun Sep 02, 2012 11:49 pm
Hello :) - quite long, but if you wouldn't mind. work.php?id=97209




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fairyreader
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Mon Sep 03, 2012 1:07 am
fairyreader says... · Mon Sep 03, 2012 1:07 am
Please review my story Hot Winter!

There's 3 chapters and I would really like a review on chapter 3! I would like a review more on the story plot and charcters and stuff.

Chapter 1
work.php?id=96786
Chapter 2:
work.php?id=96798
chapter 3:
work.php?id=97154

Thanks!




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barefootrunner
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Fri Sep 07, 2012 6:01 pm
barefootrunner says... · Fri Sep 07, 2012 6:01 pm
This thread is now temporarily closed until I can get up to date with my shameful review backlog. I have finished myst's story, but all the posts after that remain.

Don't worry—I'll get to you!
"Not everything that counts can be counted, and not everything that can be counted counts" - Einstein

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