Request Reviews Here!

I just started writing a new novel. I can guarantee it has a very unique writing style. It is fast paced and sure to give a lot of action. I would appreciate feedback, thanks in advance. Its called the Cascades of Time
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Hi,
I'd really appreciate a review on this please - work.php?id=97148

Could you guys please review my story, please? ^^ work.php?id=97119

Thank you so much! <3

could you please review this,

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thanks a lot.

Hello - quite long, but if you wouldn't mind. work.php?id=97209

Please review my story Hot Winter!

There's 3 chapters and I would really like a review on chapter 3! I would like a review more on the story plot and charcters and stuff.

Chapter 1
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Chapter 2:
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chapter 3:
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Thanks!

This thread is now temporarily closed until I can get up to date with my shameful review backlog. I have finished myst's story, but all the posts after that remain.

Don't worry—I'll get to you!