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Sun Oct 24, 2021 8:01 am
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rida says...



Today we learn about colours


Forgetting the ghosts that I once belonged to,
I leave them in sunflower fields. Walking 20 miles south
From here, I realise the world is made of color. The river between
Grey and sunflower-yellow is thirty-six thousand feet deep; varying between
Colours of you and me.
Leaving the cemeteries of grey I find myself somewhere in-between dark and light~
No other colour can describe this; except maybe the world
  





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Mon Oct 25, 2021 1:38 am
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Liminality says...



Interesting and surreal piece, @rida! I also like your poetic use of the squiggly line ~~
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The mind of man is capable of anything - because everything is in it, all the past as well as all the future.
— Joseph Conrad, Heart of Darkness