Love those images, Plume! "key-lime-in-the-summer green" was particularly vivid for me. I remember being like o.o when I first saw a picture of key lime pie, so that line reminded me of that. I also love all the repetition and the long images strung together with dashes - it makes it very recitable.
seeing this tag and going "oh what's this? :)" then getting slapped in the face with shady's good grammar is the worst thing that's ever happened to me — SilverNight
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