Wasn't feeling up to writing new scenes today, so I just read through chapter 4 and fixed things for consistency. Usually I post lines that I wrote that day, but seeing as I didn't write much today, and that I'm still liking the dialogue between Sunny and Robert when they first meet Eniac... I'll just post that. =P
The robot floated over to a wooden gate in the fence next to the house and rapped on it with an arm. "Eniac? It's me, Robert, with a guest."
There was silence for a moment, then without any warning, a head of electric-blue hair popped up over the fence. Two narrowed eyes squinted down at Robert and Sunny. "Eh? You're going to rob me of my quest?"
Robert muttered, "I hate repeating myself. Especially when I know he understood me the first time."
Sunny decided to step in with the speech she’d thought of on the ride there. "Hello! My name is Sunny, and I and my trusted sidekick Robert are on an important quest to retrieve the error descriptions. Esteemed error guardian, would you kindly lend us your aid?"
Robert huffed indignantly. "Excuse me, I'm not your side–"
Sunny elbowed Robert.
"And we're not retrieving anything right now, we're just gathering info–"
Sunny elbowed him a little harder.
Gender:
Points: 22538
Reviews: 245