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Mount Olympus [3]



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Sat Jul 14, 2012 4:15 pm
TheClosetKidnapper says...



Nic

I glance at Rayah, trying my best not to freak out, "Why isn't she better? Why is she still like this?"
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

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Sat Jul 14, 2012 4:17 pm
PixieStix says...



Spoiler! :
Playing one person for now.


Rayah

"Long distance power," I tell him, crouching next to Jackie, "You'll be okay...hopefully. Just wait until he lets it go."
All you need is faith, trust, and a little bit of pixie-dust!





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Sat Jul 14, 2012 4:20 pm
TheClosetKidnapper says...



Spoiler! :
Okay


Nic

I swallow and look back at Jackie, keeping eye contact with her. Please, stay with me. Please. I can't do all of this without you.
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

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Sat Jul 14, 2012 4:22 pm
PixieStix says...



Jackie

I keep my eyes closed, doing as Rayah says. Deep breaths...

Rayah puts her hand to my neck to check my pulse, swearing web she gets results, "Jackie, take deep breaths."
All you need is faith, trust, and a little bit of pixie-dust!





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Sat Jul 14, 2012 4:24 pm
TheClosetKidnapper says...



Nic

I stroke the sides of Jackie's face with my thumbs, my heart racing out of my chest in worry for her.
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

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Sat Jul 14, 2012 4:28 pm
PixieStix says...



Jackie

Struggling to do as she says, I clentch my fists, coughing again.

"No, Jackie," Rayah stutters, "Don't leave."

I squeeze my eyes shut, coughing, "I can't breathe..."
All you need is faith, trust, and a little bit of pixie-dust!





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Sat Jul 14, 2012 4:32 pm
TheClosetKidnapper says...



Nic

"Jackie, please," I beg, "You can't do this to me. You're going to be okay, just stick with me."
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

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Sat Jul 14, 2012 4:33 pm
PixieStix says...



Jackie

"You think I want..." I trail off, going silent.

"JACKIE!" Rayah practically screams, shaking me, "You gotta be kidding me!"
All you need is faith, trust, and a little bit of pixie-dust!





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Sat Jul 14, 2012 9:41 pm
TheClosetKidnapper says...



Nic

"Jackie?" I call, my hands still on either side of her face, "Jacks, no! Please! Just hang in there!"
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

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Sat Jul 14, 2012 9:57 pm
PixieStix says...



Rayah

She says nothing, her face slowly draining color, "Jackie?" I call in barely a whisper, looking down.
All you need is faith, trust, and a little bit of pixie-dust!





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Sat Jul 14, 2012 10:03 pm
TheClosetKidnapper says...



Nic

I watch my wife fade and lose it completely, disappearing and reappearing in front of the b*stard who started it all. Grabbing him by the collar, I shove him up against a brick wall and get in his face, "Release the hold you have on Jackie or I'll release you."

I disintegrate with him and reappear over a cliff, holding him off the side.
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

Semiautomatic
twenty one pilots





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Sat Jul 14, 2012 10:06 pm
PixieStix says...



Rayah

Seeing Nic hold Travis over the cliff off to the side, I swallow, watching. Travis litterally freaks, nodding, and saying something about her already be too far gone to revive. He releases it and I look back at Jackie, not seeing a difference.
All you need is faith, trust, and a little bit of pixie-dust!





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Sat Jul 14, 2012 10:09 pm
TheClosetKidnapper says...



Nic

I flash back to where I am and release him, disintegrating and appearing back before Jackie. I drop to the ground and take her in my arms, setting a hand on the side of her face, "Jacks...please. Come back. I need you."
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

Semiautomatic
twenty one pilots





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Gender: Female
Points: 3435
Reviews: 125
Sat Jul 14, 2012 10:12 pm
PixieStix says...



Rayah

Nothing.

I look at Nic, "I-I think she's gone, Nic..."
All you need is faith, trust, and a little bit of pixie-dust!





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Sat Jul 14, 2012 10:15 pm
TheClosetKidnapper says...



Nic

Jace pulls Rayah away, "Leave him be, Ray. He needs to do this himself."

I pull Nic closer and cradle her in my arms, burying my face in her hair. Come back. Don't leave me like this.
I'm never what I like
I'm double sided
And I just can't hide
I kind of like it
When I make you cry
'Cause I'm twisted up, twisted up
Inside

Semiautomatic
twenty one pilots








The first draft is a trip to the amusement park. The next drafts are returning there as a safety inspector.
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