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Just caught up with your thread again and AHHh you are SO good at these! Each one does feel like it's own little story-world, and the rhymes are smooth as well. I think my favorite one is poem 6 "mother from perth" - just something extra heart-breaking to me about that one especially in midst of me reading it in a "sing-song" voice in my head from the form. Looking forward to reading more.
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