You're so close to your goal! Best of luck getting that last one in, I particularly love poem 14 because it has all my favorite imagery - beautiful ending too. Your poems all seem to focus on such nice concrete images and then expand into these beautiful little reflections. Lovely to read.
you should know i am a time traveler & there is no season as achingly temporary as now
"The trouble with Borrowing another mind was, you always felt out of place when you got back to your own body, and Granny was the first person ever to read the mind of a building. Now she was feeling big and gritty and full of passages.
'Are you all right?'
Granny nodded, and opened her windows. She extended her east and west wings and tried to concentrate on the tiny cup held in her pillars." — Terry Pratchett, Discworld: Equal Rites
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