Some of the thoughts in your poems are told quite simply/directly, but the emotional layer is deep I believe. (Like in "Heal", "Trembling", and "Escape" especially).
This stanza in particular stood out as feeling like there was much behind it.
Freedom is never near
I just want to forget the ones I thought I held dear
I will escape from you
So you can feel pain like I do
Keep up all the lovely writing! I will look forward to continue to see where your poetry endeavors take you.
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