I like these short poems of yours, Kelisot! The ones where you incorporate Math are really interesting: the line breaks and shape kind of reflect what the words are saying, particularly the one on "inverse".
'Encrypted Tome' has this sense of chaos to it. The voice is very energetic there, which grabbed my attention. Also:
am i a machine someone help me please
*sends help*
I really like 'anomaly'. Each of the images is eye-catching and playful, especially "Rats that jump like bunnies". Somehow with the animal motif, "Books with painful stings" makes me imagine a book that's a honeybee (or a honeybee that's also a book?).
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