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This is where I shall chronicle my NaPoWriMo poems.

Current Total: 6
Last edited by tgirly on Tue Apr 04, 2017 3:43 am, edited 3 times in total.
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Poem One: Artifice

I like to call them "artificial source of confidence."
They are the smack of high heels on tile floors,
the knowledge that I cannot trip,
that, if I cannot trip, I cannot be stopped.
They are love notes left in the margins of my manuscripts,
for myself, by myself:
Yes. You're a writer.
Yes. You are capable.
Yes. This is your story to tell and no one else's.
They are every time I didn't look in the mirror,
Every time I locked gazes with my own eyes
(It's impossible to have ugly eyes)

They may be white lies but
I have told myself I believe them so many times
I almost believe it.
I have stopped checking the ingredient label,
I swallow whatever's easiest.
When I was young, I admired clever people. Now that I am old, I admire kind people.
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Poem Two: Coincidence

I have convinced myself that fireflies know Morse Code
and the stars are just one crazy Connect-the-Dots,
if I stare at them long enough,
they'll become a map to buried treasure.
I crave an end to coincidence,
a confirmation of karma,
the assurance that if there's not a rainbow yet,
there will be.
And at its base, a pot of gold just for me.
I want to believe that success is inevitable
but more importantly,
I want failure to be a fallacy
or a puzzle with an answer
I just must work my way through.
When I was young, I admired clever people. Now that I am old, I admire kind people.
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tgirly! Love your work so far; really nice stuff! I like this line so much:
"I want to believe that success is inevitable/ but more importantly, / I want failure to be a fallacy"

I feel like that holds a lot of truth. Lovely!
you should know i am a time traveler &
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Poem Three: The Art of Time Wasting

Play some mindless computer game,
one that involves spurts of rapid clicking.
spacebarspacebarspacebarspacebarspace
stillness.

Sit with your head on your desk,
tucked in a nest of your arms,
dream of what the world would be like
sssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssssideways.

Doodle in the margins of notes
you don't have to turn in-
hearts and stars and dinosaurs with flamethrowers-
it doesn't matter if you erase them afterwards,
no one will ever see them.

Stare at the not-quite-white walls,
marinate in every second, become
as porous as the bricks to time's slow
trickle, until the ticks hypnotize you.
Or

Write a silly little poem
about all the silly little ways
you could spend your time.
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Poem Four: Warped Glass

The glass is not see-through. However
it is still glass.
Sometimes colors and movement sneak their way through.
Never shape.
Brains must work in a similar fashion:
so much lost in translation.
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Poem Five: Zoom Out

The surface of this world is smoother than a golf ball,
its highest highs, its deepest lows
just bumps and blemishes
from a distance.
City skylines, clothed in violet and lilac light,
never show the muck and grime.
There's no difference between a smile and a frown
when viewed from space.
Please,
don't stand so close to me.
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Poem Six: If Tiles Wanted to Rise Up and Take Over the Planet, They Probably Could

but I wouldn't worry about it if I were you.
The scratched and scuffed squares in millions of schools,
the aesthetically-pleasing rooster in your grandmother's kitchen,
the elderly museum mosaics from ancient Rome,
tougher than paper,
more plentiful than pears,
after years of being walked all over-
literally walked over-
or discarded and smashed for no good reason,
or left stuck somewhere for years and year and-
but I wouldn't worry about it.
Tiling is mostly friendly.
It's the window frames you have to watch out for.
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Hey, this might be a little late. But I love all of your poems (and you still totally have another day, so please post 20 more so I can enjoy your lovely work more!) :)

I would love to see poem 4 extended out, this idea of warped glass and communication lost in translation is really elegantly melded together. And what a title for poem 6! It made me smile. Yep, well that's all for now.

ps. please post more! :)
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Poem 6 made me laugh. And one and two just felt so truthful. Well done! :D
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Russets and tangerine shades of old gold flushing the very outside edge of the senses ... deep shining ochres, burnt umber and parchments of baked earth—reflecting on itself and through itself, filtering the light.
— Guildenstern (Rosencrantz & Guildenstern Are Dead by Tom Stoppard)