Young Writers Society

Harsh reviews are harsh
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Go ahead and give it your all, it's one of my few mouse drawn digital art pieces.
I'm going to be getting a tablet soon so I'll have more decent art then this.
It was made on Neopaint.

By the way aka-x is my deviantart account,
so that's why that's at the bottom

Oh Wow.
I can't do much better on the computer and I absolutely have no idea how to critque this even though I do draw myself. But you will always see my drawings on paper. Not on the computer.
I like it, and I am a big fan of the Zelda game series.
I give you a 4.5/5.
Or if you times that by two..
9/10
Be happy!

Incognito Temptation wrote:Oh Wow.
I can't do much better on the computer and I absolutely have no idea how to critque this even though I do draw myself. But you will always see my drawings on paper. Not on the computer.
I like it, and I am a big fan of the Zelda game series.
I give you a 4.5/5.
Or if you times that by two..
9/10
Be happy!

Aw, man thanks!
xD
I'm sure I can do better soon enough.
But thank you so much!

It's amazingly nice especially since it is mouse drawn. I don't have a tablet so I do my basic outlining on paper, scan it and then use Photoshop. Though I don't play Zelda, I can see that the likeness is pretty striking.

Really amzing effort.

The only thing I'd like to point out is that the hat's shadow doesn't fall on the brown patch of the dress. There's a dark brown patch on the other side, but not for the hat's shadow.

I look forward to your artwork once you have a tablet!

Wow -- nicely done, considering it was mouse drawn. Not an easy thing to do, that. I love his face expression, xD it's like, "Shut up! I'm done listening to 'hey listen'!" I would mute the volume thanks to that annoying little fairy when I played.

Only thing I can point out is that his neck looks slightly disconnected... rather, the green over-tunic's left shoulder (his left, my right) looks like it's floating. Thinking it's just the shading, maybe? Other than that, though, your art looks pretty good. Again, very impressive for a mouse drawn work.

Wow! You did this with a mouse!?? You are my hero! xD


I can't mouse draw to save my life. I can't paper draw to begin with, so if you did this, AND you colored it. It's amazing. I like it alot! (my sister thought it was Peter Pan xD)

I like his facial expression! I can imagine how tough it was to capture it perfectly. Good job on that. You did it well!

I'd like to see more of your work!

Keep it up!

xxJune

Yay! *cheers* A Zelda game fan! You can has a cookie!

Anyway, onto the review!

You did this with a mouse? That's really amazing. Seriously.

It looks exactly like Link. I love his facial expression and his eye. I don't know why. Oh well. ^_^

The only thing that bothered me was that the angry-thingy on his head was too fat/the lines were too close together.

Other than that it is really good for mouse drawn!

And I love your user name!

-Sakura

Wow you did this with a mouse! Your amazing!!!!!
The only thing that bothered me was that he looked like he was mad.