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Yes, it's to do with my obsession with horses.

And I know it is a large size, but it's not gargantuan, at least.

From what I can see of it, it looks pretty good! The cheek bulges out too much - it looks like it's got a mouthful of bubblegum or something - and the eye is too high up. The horn looks really nice, though.

Scale it down, because when it's this big you can't really get an overall impression. I can has smaller picature, plz?

You should definitly size it down a bit, but from what i can see it's really good! I love the horn on top of the horses head the way its rounded is amazing. You also did a great job with the horses eye.

Over all awesome job- Tiffany

nicely done. The only thing I would change is the size its really hard to see everything and give a decent review,

this is soooooo big I can't see it propeerly which makes me do this

Can you resise it so I can see it better and can give it a proper review?

Meevs

(PM me if you do resize it so I don't miss is please????)

xx

This looks really good from what I can see of it. The shading is excellent, especially in the eye and horn. You have incredible talent when it comes to drawing, especially horses.

Perhaps a smaller picture, please?

-May

I resizeded it for you! Sorry I have tendency to do that to a few people...
Haha
Anyway, this is really nice.
Like Maye said the shading is amazing and so is the detail in the mane.
Awesome.
I personally thought that a unicorn's horn was highed up, but hey, it's your drawing!
Anywhozels, nicely done! Nice!

Ah brilliant that is much better

I really like this, it looks realistic from the hrose part, and the shading all over looks really good. I think my favourite part is the nose though, it looks really lif elike almost 3-d so well done.

And many thanks for re-sizing it

Meevs
xx

wow! That unicorn is beautiful! I really loved how you shaded it. Its eyes are amazing too. just work on the hair, to me the unicorn is wonderful; however the hair of its mane sort of brings it down a little bit.

O, I have missed all this! (I've been away..)
Thanks you everybody. And thanks for sizing it down. I was going to get round to doing it. Some time, anyway.

I love the shading (something I could never do), it looks realistic! The horn is it's best feature, I think. The only thing that bothers me, though, is it's muzzle. (Or nose or whatever you want to call it.) It's a bit too long...

This is very nice! I've always found horses difficult to draw, and this is better than I've ever done.
The horn is beautiful, and so is the eye. I love the gleam in it.
I think the mane is a bit...flat. Try giving it a little more bounce and movement, like real hair. The snout is really good as well. The shading is nearly flawless

Other than that hair bit, I really like it! Unicorns ftw!


*anti-pop

My only problem is the horn. I have always imagined the horn being further up the head. As in, above the eyes beneath the forelock?

But it's your pic so no biggie ;p

The cheek was very nicely created, well done. But the muzzle got to me. It was too out of the ordinary, it just didn't melt into the rest of the hair like a normal horse's would.

Though it's an impressive pic i like it

Nice. I really love how you did the eye. I wish you'd maybe colored it a little bit to give it some pop. Also, you could maybe add a background as well. Just some suggestions. Good job!

Ciao baby,

Dream,

XOXO

Wow, this looks very good. I will start off with a little critique and then I will bring on the praise. I think that the cheek is a little too big. It does not match the rest of the face well. The hair of the unicorn seems too thin. Lastly there is a slight bend in the middle of the unicorn's horn. Overall I have to say this is really well drawn. Your picture is so lifelike. The shading is incredible. I also love the placement of the horn itself. Instead of being further back like cartoons portray the horn in the front of the unicorn's head. This is perfect because the horn is supposed to be the most outstanding feature of the unicorn. Once again great job.