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Sun Jan 20, 2013 4:45 am
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GeeLyria says...



Sometimes words cannot translate
the complexity of the soul.
Sometimes a divested heart is all that's left
but it just isn't enough.

If love is kind and beautiful,
why am I empty-handed?
And if love is inconsiderately cruel,
how come it write my poems? .... :( lol
Noob is a state of being, not a length of time. ~Ego

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Sun Jan 20, 2013 5:07 am
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PenguinAttack says...



I made worlds to suit
the cards I'd been dealt
as though a bad hand
could be reversed
if I tilted my head so.

The clank of your metal
striding into my arms
reminds me of the boiler,
Kamaji stealing snores
inside the heat and steam.

All the bad hands strike
the metal of my time
and come clattering
down (and down)
where they belong.
I like you as an enemy, but I love you as a friend.
  





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Sun Jan 20, 2013 7:41 pm
Aley says...



Work and Play

Stall me no longer you wretched fiend!
There is something I must do
And do it hastily I must!
Desist this nonsense of detaining me.

Alas my friend surely there is nothing that is so important
that you must insult me so! I am only detaining you to make sure that you enjoy your life.
My intentions are pure and you know well that you must abide by my laws with such.
You've had such a bad track record with these things that you gave me permission
To detain you.
As long as I am a friend of yours,
I shall make sure you enjoy the life you have.

Then be my friend no more
for thou art myne boon!
Give me not this silly talk and let me go.

Ah but if only you had that power still,
You gave it to me as well when I was appointed to this place.
Sit back and weave my dear, for I shan't let you leave until it is well done.
That project has progressed no more than an inch in the last week
and I am sick of your procrastination.
So sit and do or I shall surely burn that book of yours.

Hath thy no dignity?
To waist money as
such would be pointless
I came for sustenance,
not entertainment.

And your good humor shall have it's sustenance
then after I am satisfied,
I shall feed you
and set you
on your way.

Until next time my friend.

Until then.
  





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Sun Jan 20, 2013 10:50 pm
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Audy says...



i write you like how I would write
my big toe (not write with my big toe,
that's blasphemous)

i have to bend to reach you now,
when it was easier done long before--
but i guess i'm just afraid of the limp
of letting go
  





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Sun Jan 20, 2013 11:08 pm
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Meshugenah says...



(audy what this is i don't even)

you made me do this -
this blasphemous thing
that defies what little reason
has left to me

and the words that hide
between lines in notebooks
too scribbled over to read anymore

have faded. black to blue
and blue to grey
to oil marks from the fingers that turned
each page for years
until the words were emblazoned on eyelids
that could only sometimes see.

the flames ate each page
more quickly than the eyes could.
***Under the Responsibility of S.P.E.W.***
(Sadistic Perplexion of Everyone's Wits)

Medieval Lit! Come here to find out who Chaucer plagiarized and translated - and why and how it worked in the late 1300s.

I <3 Rydia
  





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Sun Jan 20, 2013 11:12 pm
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Tenyo says...



The mistakes we make
today are reflected in
tomorrow's shadows.

The consequences
of tomorrow are stained in
history's pages.

The memories of
yesterday still whisper in
the dreams I cling to.
We were born to be amazing.
  





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Sun Jan 20, 2013 11:17 pm
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DragonGirl11 says...



They told me to write -
some kind of poem, that is.
So I guess I must.
~*~

"You could look at the raindrops on your window, or you could look through the window and see the rainbow."
~K.C. Oxford

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Sun Jan 20, 2013 11:25 pm
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Firestarter says...



You were on my bookcase once,
tall and proud. I fitted you in
between history and poetry
and miscellany. I bent your pages
and I broke your spine.
You were mine.

You have a new home under my bed.
I reach for you in the deepest,
loneliest moments in the night,
but you have only
empty prose to fill my holes.
Nate wrote:And if YWS ever does become a company, Jack will be the President of European Operations. In fact, I'm just going to call him that anyways.
  





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Mon Jan 21, 2013 1:08 am
KaiTheGreater says...



Hi-Coo

Pretty mourning dove
We love to hear you cooing
Come and sing to us!

Did anyone say we had to make it up on the spot?
Formerly DragonLily and RoseAndThorn
  





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Mon Jan 21, 2013 7:42 am
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noninjaes says...



An impromptu chat Villanelle between Audy, Aley, and Myself.

I like honey
It is so sweet
Isn't that funny

I once was called "Cunny"
But they thought I was meat
I like honey

Cunny was a bunny
That'd be neat
Isn't that funny

Although not as sweet as money
That I can use to buy some sweets
I like honey

I am a poor sonny
No shoes on my feet
Isn't that funny

My nose is also runny
and I can't imagine why, but
I like honey
Isn't that funny
Noni Naps Through Nano
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Stories Not Otherwise My Own

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Being awesome since Jan 2012.
  





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Mon Jan 21, 2013 2:20 pm
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Hannah says...



instead of trimming, i grew it long
and like my friends all dreamed of, it grew into the grass,
twirling around the blades
and slipping in the small spaces between the shafts and the dirt
until it could really say it was underground.
which means that when the world ended (like all my fiends dreamed of)
i was left hanging with my hair stamped down into the earth,
watching as pieces of mountains floated beneath my feet
and down down into space. and i saw the oceans pour out
leaving me thirsty.
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Wed Jan 23, 2013 12:02 am
Meoiu says...



Hello Kitty's a brute,
bunnies are cute,
this poem reeks,
and so do you! ^_^
  





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Wed Jan 23, 2013 12:30 am
methrirr123 says...



Where there lies peanut,
spread with care,
upon the knife,
It lingers there,
It's sweet scent flows
through misty air,
the bread, once boring,
white and bare,
Now does have,
some Peanut butter on it.

The jelly sweet,
it's fruity taste,
for not a drop
shall go to waste,
I scrape the jar
the sound it makes!
An erie screach,
my jaw does shake,
and now the bread
also has some Jelly on it.

(wow, that actually came out pretty good xD)

From the ashes a fire shall be woken,
A light from the shadows shall spring;
Renewed shall be blade that was broken,
The crownless again shall be king.
  





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Wed Jan 23, 2013 3:51 am
methrirr123 says...



Crap, I though. I had come back
To early, you see, for nobody has replied yet.
Where have gone my poetic friends?
and then I remembered.
It's only been a few hours.
Calm down... The'll be back.


I SAID CALM DOWN!!!!

From the ashes a fire shall be woken,
A light from the shadows shall spring;
Renewed shall be blade that was broken,
The crownless again shall be king.
  





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Thu Jan 24, 2013 2:10 pm
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PenguinAttack says...



I watch the quake of waves
slither out and back
I should like to know
how many colours the sea
makes as the sun sets.
How the sand sticks between
heel and toe,
cool white arch of grit.
I should like to live by the sea
in a highrise cottage
or shack in situ.
I like you as an enemy, but I love you as a friend.
  








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