Um.. I guess I'll rate the first sentence first then them together XD
1. It was great :d kinda catchy... I wanna read the rest
2. Now I wanna read the rest even more
Ok, here's my first sentence (I haven't even finished the 1st draft so, that's why it's not better....):
I shoved my hands against the door, watching the long nails scratch my wrist, leaving thin lines of blood.
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