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Haiku Train



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Sat Dec 09, 2023 2:22 pm
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herbalhour says...



snowfall at dayspring
unnatural but serene
maybe its just fate
nothing is forever but everything was infinite

herb/tea - he/him/his, she/her/hers
  





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Sat Dec 09, 2023 5:32 pm
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Spearmint says...



maybe it's just fate
that sundered us like split wood.
...no, it was our choice
mint, she/her


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Sat Dec 09, 2023 5:37 pm
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herbalhour says...



...no, it was our choice
to laugh at those lower things
was it just at all?
nothing is forever but everything was infinite

herb/tea - he/him/his, she/her/hers
  





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Mon Dec 11, 2023 4:00 am
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APoltergeist says...



was it just at all?
they cry, gavel hits dark wood
Silence! Let him speak!
"i wish to steal the stars from the night sky and put them in your eyes"
  





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Mon Dec 11, 2023 7:44 am
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Liminality says...



Silence! Let him speak!
The lone crow on the tree top
opening his beak.
she/her

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Have you met my friend, The Story Review Template?
  





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Mon Dec 11, 2023 12:11 pm
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herbalhour says...



opening his beak
forced to say the words of
we cant be friends
nothing is forever but everything was infinite

herb/tea - he/him/his, she/her/hers
  





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Mon Dec 11, 2023 3:43 pm
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APoltergeist says...



We can't be friends
I'm just a side character
Dear antagonist


Spoiler! :
(I wrote this out and then realized antagonist is way too long so now it's a letter written backwards. ^^')
"i wish to steal the stars from the night sky and put them in your eyes"
  





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Wed Dec 13, 2023 6:33 pm
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Plume says...



Dear antagonist,
will you vanish if I stop
looking at mirrors?
I was born to speak all mirth and no matter.
  





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Wed Dec 13, 2023 6:52 pm
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herbalhour says...



looking at mirrors
shards and glass made of undone
dreams and other hopes
nothing is forever but everything was infinite

herb/tea - he/him/his, she/her/hers
  





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Wed Dec 13, 2023 7:48 pm
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APoltergeist says...



Dreams and other hopes
which we hold so dearly close
to our heads and hearts
"i wish to steal the stars from the night sky and put them in your eyes"
  





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Thu Dec 14, 2023 12:02 am
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Liminality says...



To our heads and hearts,
the flight of many blackbirds
home in the evening.
she/her

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Have you met my friend, The Story Review Template?
  





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Thu Dec 14, 2023 1:11 pm
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APoltergeist says...



Home in the evening.
Used to be daily routine,
Are you happy now?
"i wish to steal the stars from the night sky and put them in your eyes"
  





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Thu Dec 14, 2023 5:09 pm
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Spearmint says...



are you happy now?
no, the city lights whisper
no, the stars echo
mint, she/her


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Thu Dec 14, 2023 6:46 pm
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mythh says...



No, the stars echo
Yes, they also shatter at
A glimpse of the past.
The name's Myth.
  





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Thu Dec 14, 2023 7:20 pm
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Plume says...



A glimpse of the past--
I see through your irises
a young world and us.
I was born to speak all mirth and no matter.
  








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