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Manny
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Sat May 03, 2008 9:29 pm
Manny says... · Sat May 03, 2008 9:29 pm
The remarks of a sarcastic girl on how she views the world? Probably read the back for more information.


Viral Society




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Aedomir
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Sun May 04, 2008 5:59 pm
Aedomir says... · Sun May 04, 2008 5:59 pm
Horror? Apocalyptic? Zombies? The viral is like virus. Sounds good, interesting take.

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BigBadBear
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Sun May 04, 2008 6:13 pm
BigBadBear says... · Sun May 04, 2008 6:13 pm
It gives me the picture of a misty morning in the mountains. Very adventurous.

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thunder_dude7
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Mon May 05, 2008 12:04 am
thunder_dude7 says... · Mon May 05, 2008 12:04 am
Makes me think of person and has something to do with their ancestors. Very nice, 8.5/10

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This_is_history
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Mon May 05, 2008 4:26 am
This_is_history says... · Mon May 05, 2008 4:26 am
Pretty, makes me think freedom, possibly Civil War or Child Labor story?

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Conrad Rice
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Tue May 06, 2008 1:56 am
Conrad Rice says... · Tue May 06, 2008 1:56 am
Makes me think of something like riches to rags, or something down that vein.

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Church
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Tue May 06, 2008 1:59 am
Church says... · Tue May 06, 2008 1:59 am
I would have to guess a romance that has an important scene near the ocean.

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MidnightVampire
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Tue May 06, 2008 2:15 am
MidnightVampire says... · Tue May 06, 2008 2:15 am
*strokes chin while thinking* The tittle seems a little long, (I'm prone to go toward shorter tittles). I might read it, that is if the blurb is intersting.

Family Tree
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Kylan
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Tue May 06, 2008 2:31 am
Kylan says... · Tue May 06, 2008 2:31 am
Kind of dry. Maybe a story relating to geneology. Perhaps the MC is in search of his or her heritage.

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Aedomir
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Sat May 10, 2008 4:05 pm
Aedomir says... · Sat May 10, 2008 4:05 pm
Hmm... sounds interesting, I might have a look. Sounds like either some emotional journey or a long travel/quest.

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teenweirdo
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Mon May 12, 2008 1:08 am
teenweirdo says... · Mon May 12, 2008 1:08 am
Right away it makes me think there's going to be a chaotic ruler or some sort of evil tyrant ruling the world.

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Emerson
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Mon May 12, 2008 1:14 am
Emerson says... · Mon May 12, 2008 1:14 am
It sounds interesting. I might look at the back cover, and read the blurb. It sounds like it could be a fantasy story involving woods, or maybe it's about an incident that happened to a character in a forest? The secret? Or maybe there are elves. Haha, It could be a lot of things.

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JFW1415
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Mon May 12, 2008 2:56 am
JFW1415 says... · Mon May 12, 2008 2:56 am
I would definately read the back cover.

It sounds like it's about a woman, probably mid-twenties and single, who has had a lot of troubles - probably lot's of recent death. Maybe she's struggling with her faith because of this? Or maybe there's no God mentioned, but she's struggling to keep going.

Tell Me Life Is Beautiful

I'm actually planning a story around this, but maybe someone can inspire me to add some interesting sub-plot to it. :)

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Gahks
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Mon May 12, 2008 9:25 am
Gahks says... · Mon May 12, 2008 9:25 am
Sounds cynical and somewhat hopeful, which is probably the intended tone.

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Kalliope
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Mon May 12, 2008 2:30 pm
Kalliope says... · Mon May 12, 2008 2:30 pm
I'd definetly take a closer look at this one. Makes you stop and think Wait. Isn't that the same thing?

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