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Thu Mar 30, 2006 10:55 pm
Tazy says...



She took one step towards the edge
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Fri Mar 31, 2006 5:09 am
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The wind whipped at her clothes, threatening to send her over the brink prematurely.
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Fri Mar 31, 2006 7:32 am
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The wind was so loud, that she never heard the person who came behind her.

Without hesitation, the person pushed her of the cliff.
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Fri Mar 31, 2006 9:36 am
Myth says...



At first it was like flying, ghostly hands flapped her hair wildly about her face and she spread out her arms like a bird in flight...
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Fri Mar 31, 2006 9:08 pm
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she wasnt scared of what was happening, only what might await her at the bottom. She could feel the wind lapping at her hair and could see the ground coming to meet her. She closed her eyes and woke up.
Banging on her alarm clock which was blaring, she rubbed her head.
"Twice in one week. What did the dream mean?"
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Sat Apr 01, 2006 9:17 pm
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No time to think about it, she got up and got dressed, ate and went to school.

They were having a field trip that day, it was windy, and they were going to the Grand Canyon.
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Sun Apr 02, 2006 9:19 pm
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She clambered gingerly onto the bus the dream flashing through her mind. 'nothings going to happpen is it?' she thought to herself as she though of getting off the bus.
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Sun Apr 02, 2006 10:48 pm
Dargquon Ql'deleodna says...



In getting of the bus she was blasted with a gust of wind, her auburn hair flying all around her, she walked away from the bus a few feet and then froze, yards away from the edge she slowly trembled afraid of what her dream meant, walking towards the rail she passed by a sign that read "Danger! Canyon walls slick from rain" leaning over the rail she looked down into the deep canyon the menacing river roaring below. "What are you doing, are you blind! did you not read the sign?!?" the officer slowly said berating her, "now get back to your group" he said roughly pushing her away from the edge.
  





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Tue Apr 04, 2006 11:50 pm
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She stumbled back toward her class.
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Wed Apr 05, 2006 8:03 pm
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Something unatural stirred in her stomach and she found herself clutching her necklace, if nothing could happen then why did she feel like she had just escaped her death.
"Is something wrong Rebecka?"
Her friend Tony was looking at her real weird, "Uh no, nothings wrong."
"You look like you just seen a ghost. Are ya sure your okay?"
Smileing she let her necklace go, "Im fine."
At that moment they heard a girl scream and several people ran to the edge of the cliff. Tina meyer an enemy of her had just fallen off the cliff. It hadnt been her death, it had been Tinas she had saw.
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Wed Apr 05, 2006 8:32 pm
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All the schoolchildren ran to the bus.

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Wed Apr 05, 2006 9:21 pm
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Had she seen this coming? If so, who had pushed Tina..? Just because she didn't like the other girl; that was no reason not to look into this.. Murder, that's what they would call it. And she... she was witholding evidence if she didn't tell anyone what she knew. And yet... who would believe her..?

Panicked voices sounded around her. Desperately she sunk to the ground with hands over her ears, and eyes tight shut, in an attempt to escape the scene around her.
  





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Thu Apr 06, 2006 7:54 pm
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Suddenlly another image hit her, a man with a white button up T-shirt and levi jeans that looked washed out. He was walking behing Tina when she had fallen off the cliff. Opening her eyes she looked around and saw him clear as day standing back with a look of amusement on his face. Her eyes connected with his and he smiled as if he knew she saw him do it. Her friend Tony grabbed her arm and rushed her back away from the cliff. Should she tell the police now that she had saw that man in a vision push Tina off the cliff?

Okay Im just going to say shes 17 and in 11th grade
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Thu Apr 06, 2006 9:38 pm
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Tony pulled her to the bus, and in her shock, Rebekah seemed unable to stop him.

The man in the white shirt smirked at her, their eyes connecting for a long moment, before the teachers behind her finally urged her onto the bus. When she looked again, the man was gone.
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Thu Apr 06, 2006 10:11 pm
Snoink says...



He wanted to kill her, she was sure of it.

She wiped her face hesitantly and then walked quickly to store. She wanted to talk with her friend...
Ubi caritas est vera, Deus ibi est.

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