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Risk and Reward



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Mon Jun 06, 2022 3:48 am
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Queenie made her way to the door.
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Mon Jun 06, 2022 4:02 am
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The elf followed at a distance.
"The artist deals with what cannot be said in words. The artist whose medium is fiction does this in words. The novelist says in words what cannot be said in words." --Ursula K. Le Guin

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Mon Jun 06, 2022 4:06 am
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She had tracked the elf out of the corner of her eye and saw him get up. Great. She loved being followed to her car. It wasn't like she had anything else to get done.
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Mon Jun 06, 2022 4:11 am
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He followed her into the parking lot. "Er, hey. Human."
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Mon Jun 06, 2022 4:14 am
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She turned around and tucked her phone into her pocket. "Yes?"
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Mon Jun 06, 2022 4:21 am
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"Are you a bodyguard, by any chance? I heard you on the phone in there."
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Mon Jun 06, 2022 4:22 am
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Queenie raised an eyebrow. "Why does it matter to you?"
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Mon Jun 06, 2022 4:25 am
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"I'm offering a job opportunity. Depending on your credentials, that is."
"The artist deals with what cannot be said in words. The artist whose medium is fiction does this in words. The novelist says in words what cannot be said in words." --Ursula K. Le Guin

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Mon Jun 06, 2022 4:28 am
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"I have a job, thanks."
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Mon Jun 06, 2022 4:30 am
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"But does it pay as well as I can?"
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Mon Jun 06, 2022 4:34 am
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She chuckled. "What are you offering?"
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Mon Jun 06, 2022 4:36 am
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"All the gold and silver you could wish for. How does that sound?"
"The artist deals with what cannot be said in words. The artist whose medium is fiction does this in words. The novelist says in words what cannot be said in words." --Ursula K. Le Guin

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Mon Jun 06, 2022 4:39 am
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"Already have that," she said, "Anything else?"
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Mon Jun 06, 2022 4:39 am
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The elf stared at her for a moment, narrowing his eyes. "...Are you making fun of me?"
"The artist deals with what cannot be said in words. The artist whose medium is fiction does this in words. The novelist says in words what cannot be said in words." --Ursula K. Le Guin

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Mon Jun 06, 2022 4:44 am
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She rolled her eyes. "No, I'm not."

(yo, in her canon her dad's a pretty well known billionaire who owns a security company, which she works for. She wouldn't necessarily be well known but her dad is pretty much a household name for a variety of reasons. Would that carry over here?)
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