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Mon Oct 22, 2007 4:20 am
Snoink says...



*UNLOCKED*
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Tue Oct 23, 2007 4:05 pm
death5614 says...



This storybook should be locked and shunned from society itself. It is a discrace to the halo franchise. It is copywrite infringment to say the least. an admin should delete this storybook, it is a waist of space and time
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Wed Oct 24, 2007 4:32 am
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Alrighty, I'm getting a little tired of this. From now on, no posts in this storybook unless you are contributing to the story. No more "this isn't accurate" posts, or "this is garbage and should be removed" posts.
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Wed Oct 24, 2007 11:05 am
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(Yeah, what Adam said. This isn't exactly like the game because it's not supposed to be. The creator of this storybook set it in an alternate dimension so we could have more freedom with the storybook. If you want something that's from the actual Halo universe, post in Halo: The Great Journey. Geez, I've posted in several Star Wars storybooks and not once has anyone complained about copyright infringement.)

"We found a stray Grunt," Dynamo informed. "Permission to scout ahead for any remaining enemies."

"Permission granted, but make it quick." Dynamo nodded and continued scouting the forest. As he left he could hear Cortana giving everyone orders to pack up and leave.

Dynamo strained his ears to hear any sign of activity. He knew he probably wouldn't find anymore enemies, the battle earlier would have either killed any stragglers, or sent them running. Even so, he still wanted some action.

"Come on, where are you little bastards hiding...?" He stopped to check his surroundings and thought about heading back. That's when he heard something, the faintest brush of leaves in the trees.

Without even thinking he turned, raised his battle rifle and fired. A few seconds later an alien sniper rifle fell out of a nearby tree, followed by the body of a dead Jackal. The alien had two bullet holes in its chest and one in its neck.

Dynamo kept his battle rifle raised and scanned the rest of the trees for any signs of movement. After a few moments of waiting, he was sure he was alone. He headed back to the others but kept his gun in his hands in case he ran into anymore snipers along the way.
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Sat Oct 27, 2007 12:52 am
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Shadow heard the gun noises and looked at Cortana. "It might be dangerous out there, I should go help him."

"No, if he's already dead you'll just delay us even more. There might be an ambush up there and you'd just be asking to die. This planets fallen and there's no way we can save it. I have orders to leave at once."

"I'm not leaving a member of my team behind." Shadow leapt unto his black Mongoose and sped off into the woods.

"You'll be left behind!" Cortana shouted after him.

"Then I guess I'll see you in hell!"
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Sat Oct 27, 2007 1:37 am
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Shadow speed through the woods. "DYNAMO! DYNAMO!" He saw the missing Spartan ahead of him and skidded to a stop. "We're leaving."

"Get down. They're near." Dynamo clutched his gun as if it were his child.

"Who cares, we're going to get left on this damn planet if we're not careful." Shadow began reaching for Dynamo when he fell off his Mongoose, a Brute spike in his arm. "God dammit"

"Told ya' there everywhere."
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